"When It Hurts The Most" Reviews/Comments [ 78 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yami Kitsuen On: June 10, 2003 13:28 CDT Comment/Review: Hello I'm back!!! No chapter today so here is another review ^_^ I relly hope you do get it up soon. And I know what you mean that review's make you write faster. Its the same way for me. Any way keep up the awsome work ^_^ Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Tammy-chan On: June 09, 2003 01:57 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG! don't let that happen to him, and stop cutting off at a crucial point in the story like that! You are going to make me tear my hair out!
It's really good though. Hurry up and post teh next chapter! *waits impatiently* |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune On: June 08, 2003 20:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YAY!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!! This one was up FAST!!!! YAY!!!! I hope the other one is going to be up just as fast!!! I will be checking every day that I can. and every day that its not up I will put in a review to help you go faster ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 16:13 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WHY MUST YOU ALWAYS LEAVE IT AT A CLIFFHANGER! For once can't you give us the goods without makeing us beg! |
Reviewed By: Mercury Elf On: June 07, 2003 15:56 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awesome! Update soon!!!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Tammy H. On: June 07, 2003 01:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's about time! hurry up and finish it! I think that you write wonderfully, no matter what the subject matter...^_^. You have a very creative imagionation and I enjoy reading what you write, because it is good and I think for the shock factor. |
Reviewed By: Rayne On: June 06, 2003 23:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is turnig out great! ceep up the great work! Oh and i was hoping that in the next chap or soon that Bakura wil git to beet the shit out of his Grandfather!!!! Pleas dont let him get away with waht he is doing to Ryou. well anway i cant wate till the next chap comes! ....Later! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: mai_kujaku On: June 06, 2003 19:51 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: it is good. pls write more! it is fun to read! |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune On: June 06, 2003 15:00 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YAY!!!! I have been waiting for the next chapter! I love it! I can't wait until you post the next one! and I will send in a review every day if I have to ^_^ well Ja ne and keep up the work! |
Reviewed By: Daughter of Death [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 14:36 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: add new chapter |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 09:43 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oops, didn't realize my other review sent twice...anyways, I'm sooo glad you finally got another chappy up! I can't wait for another! |
Reviewed By: Oni On: June 06, 2003 08:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was so short! But it was really good. I hope you'll write a new chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Yami Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 16:37 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have to continue this soon! I love this fanfic sofar. pure Ryou-torture. I love it! |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl On: May 10, 2003 13:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely love this fic! It's so good! I can't wait for chapter 7, need more!! I'm kinda hoping that Bakura gets to kill...or at least maim...Ryou's grandfather...lol gotta love the violent Yamis!! Anyways, it's really great and I hope you get more up soon! |
Reviewed By: KaibaGirl On: May 10, 2003 13:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I absolutely love this fic! It's so good! I can't wait for chapter 7, need more!! I'm kinda hoping that Bakura gets to kill...or at least maim...Ryou's grandfater...lol gotta love the violent Yamis!! Anyways, it's really great and I hope you get more up soon! |
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