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Title: 28 Days
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2005 00:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story.Although the spelling & grammer could've been better.Well keep up the great work.Catch ya later.
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2005 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, finally! It took longer than I expected but I've gotten to the end. Surprise, surprise. I'll never look at doctors and lawyers the same way again. They are definately not as close as I thought they were. Yale or Hardvard notice the or. I seriously didn't think of it like that until now. Much applauds. I was sure Kagome was as good as dead in this chapter even before I read it, however I couldn't keep myself away. I knew she was going pass on eventually and I was bracing for the heartbreak I would experiance. Half way through though I was devastated that I allowed myself to read the last chapter. I was saying why did I bother reading when I knew that Kagome was going die? And then that ending had made me regret my silly emotions from the beginning. Ha! Now that's what I call an ending. I would say that I never doubted you for a second but I can't. Alas... Alright, I'd better get going now. Just wanted to express my feelings to the world. ^^ Jah neh!
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Reviewed By: chungie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 20:31 EDT
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Tada! Another amazing story from a highly respected author. ^^ Congrats! you have my praises. I'll have to be going soon but I just wanted to say what a wonderful job you've done with this story. It's probably all finished by now however you can't have a limitt on reviews can you now? Ne wayz, I was wondering how you were so direct on the diseases and the problems of the patients. Almost like you were a doctor yourself. Well, just a thought. I'd best be on my way now. Jah neh.
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Reviewed By: kegome+inuyasha4ever On: September 10, 2005 22:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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u made me cry in chap.15and16 but the end was sooo beautifull if only there was a real boy like inuyasha he'd be the perfect bf nice sweet caring thinking he's sooo tough but actually be a real sweety on the inside and i say make another!!!!!!! please i luved this one soo much can u make another one like it??? pleaseeeeee
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Thepizzaiscold [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2005 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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HAHAH this story made me laugh out loud like more than a hundered times XD hilarious!!!!! and lol, what was with all the pens ? XD AWESOME job. i love your stories
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Title: 28 days
Reviewed By: inu girl On: July 16, 2005 15:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was the best thing i've ever read.the plot twist's where exilerating.keep writing fics.
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Reviewed By: sssssscciii On: July 13, 2005 12:55 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok this is just another sad story with a happy ending that i have read, and i must say it was very good. The Other story was ABSFT (A bus stop fairy tale). I think you should write an epi. You know put something in short bursts of time, you know: When or how they get married, how many children, um... what they might consider doing after the jobs (possible retirement places), names of their children, their grandchildren, and possibly what jobs either Generation go into. You sort of what happened at the end of apollo 13, when they gave the future um... prefrences (dont think thats the correct word to use). Anyway it's just a thought.
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Reviewed By: Oh-La-Di-la-Da Da On: June 26, 2005 07:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAEEE!!! oh my goodness, I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOO MUCH!!! it's amazing, it's awesome, it's funny it's cute, it's sweet, I couldn't count how many times I cried during the story! SO awesome! I love itt!!! you are a greay writer, this was awesome!!! I'm so glad you wrote it!!! ^^ Awesome story!!!
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Reviewed By: mangaobsessive On: June 23, 2005 17:13 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story made me laugh, cry, and so much more. I think I went throught a million emotions! Overall, this was an awesome story!
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Title: Wow....
Reviewed By: Aila On: June 05, 2005 19:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.... another Rozefire masterpiece.... i laughed, i cried, and a whole bunch of other things as i read this, and i couldn't believe that Kikyo was actually trying to SAVE Kagome... Very cool twist.... crap... now i gotta go read another of your fics....
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Reviewed By: Shappou(not logged in) On: May 27, 2005 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I must admit you had me crying through parts of the last chapter. But I had a feeling about Kikyo, nice job. I'm amazed, Candidly, I was skeptical about this story when I saw the first chapter, But I'm astonished at just how beautiful it turned out.. I loved the last line, but I couldn't get the image of a bee flying away in the distance... >
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Title: Yay.
Reviewed By: donnie_fae [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 23:33 EDT
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Yay. I really really really like this story fanfic. I'm still mad at Kikyo kissing Inuyasha, but I'm happy that they drove away, into the sunset... (It should be like that but...) (Me hate Kikyo.)
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Reviewed By: aka oashisunoyume On: May 14, 2005 14:45 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing...completely and utterly amazing... good job!! *sob* so sad its over.. :D it was still really really good though.. hehe
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Title: you'd betta read this one
Reviewed By: silver_demon_angel On: April 25, 2005 22:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol, omg this story is awsome! actualy i like all of your stories really... but anewhoo. this one rocked! the suspense...the tradegy...the romance...the humility...*da perversion!* lol, jk. you wanna know one of my favorite things? that coma game! it is so much fun, and the kids i know say, "We like to play house, but playing DEAD is a whole lot funner!" lol, and here stupid lil 'ol me used to play charlie's angels...(don't ask-little and stupid-BEWARE!) but my favorite thing was... THE INFAMOUS PURPLE PEN! damn ...so wish i had one.*lightbulb* ya know what... i think i gave it to Barney.(for those of you who are not familiar with Barney, he is a giant purple gay dinosaur who looks for the *happy* things in life) So to everyone out there, GOD BLESS AMERICA and curse the bedamned PURPLE PENS! (you'd better keep this in mind, I might run for president...)...TOOTLES!
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Reviewed By: honeybee On: April 25, 2005 02:04 EDT
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i have read the whole story and i just want to say that i think you are amazing, and incredibly talented and funny, i just finished your other story dead famous yesterday and i just want to say thank you for making my weekend so enjoyable and entertaining. keep up the good work.
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