| "28 Days" Reviews/Comments [ 149 ] |
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have one question: What did Kikyo almost getting Breast cancer have anything to do with the storyline? Also, the ending seemed kind off...forced. Other than that, this fan ficcie kicked arse. It easily made my favorites list, for what it's worth.
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Reviewed By: Yoko Oro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 14:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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WHAT?! YOU are the one who wrote this story? Dang, I heard about this ficcie from EVERYONE, and I've been dying to read it, and it turns out that it was you, YOU OF ALL PEOPLE how wrote it all along! I allready read like, 5 of your stories, but I had no idea that you were the one who wrote 28 days!! Well, now I want to read it even more, because now I am ASSURED that it was well written.
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Reviewed By: anika [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 00:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YES!!!!!! I work at a pharmacy and we all fight maliciously for the PURPLE valium pens! you have just made my decade!
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Title: Good job
Reviewed By: kane shi megami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 22:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness that was such a good story. You had me crying, laughing out loud and sobbing *close to it anyway* Such a good story I love your writing style and ideas. Very creative and loved the twists. Even though I didn't like the little kiss from Kikyo I GUESS I can over look that due to the happy ending! Great story! I hope to read more of you stories soon.
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Title: 28 Days
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahh!*Sob*Sob*Great story but the ending could've been them getting married or something but I guess everything can't end in a dream-like-fantasy.Well see ya I've got things to do my little Brother is in the emergy room at San Pedro Hospital and they're running blood tests.BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aluna On: January 23, 2005 02:42 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always touched whenever I read this. I love this story. "Good job" or "Good work" doesn't do this story justice.
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 18:04 EST
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okay, i think i said this about dead famous. Your writing is so good! i can honestly say that if you had books of these fics, i would by them. youd be my favorite author! you aremy favorite author! i think that you should change the names of these characters.. and with a bit more background info, this could be one freakin good book! please get it published..im dying to think that talent like yours isnt out there on book shelves, in stores, in my library... ,,o_o,, please tell me if you have any books written. ill buy them! if you havent, then please consider it, please! your talent is so good, and these stories are priceless... my email is kichigaikikyokagome@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: chaos_kyes_fallen_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 17:51 EST
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wow that was a great story.. i was really afraid she was going to die there.. ,,,o_o,,, im so happy. ::sniffle:: you little trickster. i almost stopped reading it before the end. XD
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Reviewed By: prinsess_serenity59 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2004 04:42 EST
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oh Nice I love this fic and I should know I AM the queen ^_^ ooh and thanks for teaching me this ¬_¬ wait how do you do the ¬ thing IM WORKING ON CUT AND PASTE HERE! wellyou made me laugh, alot I love the anthrax and letter bomb thing, you made me cry and yell *sob* NO HE CANT KILL HER *sob* (im a baby) and, you made me get a warning from my landlord for yelling no he cant kill her to loud hehe ^.¬ well bye see ya around ~Chii~ (i want to take this down to 1000 so "." '.' '♥' well to all good bye and look both ways before stepping infront of a bus *i will be quoting this story alot hehe ^'^ so there
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Reviewed By: Shell... On: November 18, 2004 21:44 EST
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Okay, you amaze me. I LOVE THIS(and you for writing it), and it was smut-less, but still amazing.... wow. That makes me happy. Very happy. (and that person in the review before my previous one is right, that person is plagiarizing and changing the names. I hate that.)...
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Reviewed By: Shell... On: November 18, 2004 20:34 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I'm going to review this again later, but about the paper crane story: (I didnt read the other reviews so forgive me) It's called Sadako and the thousand paper cranes, and (I read it in ...grade three or something...) she has leukemia and hears that if she can make a thousand paper cranes, she can have one wish. she makes hundreds, but dies before she can finish, so she was buried with the rest which her classmates/family made for her...or something...sorry.
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Title: Umm...I think someone stole ur story
Reviewed By: ChikaGurlie On: November 11, 2004 17:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um i saw @ http://www.xanga.com/home.aspx?user=Kokoro_Sango that shes like posting ur story & changing the names iono if this is you or if its just plagerism (sp?) but i thot u might wanna kno. yah so thats it but i love this story its like 1 of my faves. yah
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Title: ^~^
Reviewed By: Ofir On: November 01, 2004 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg! i just LOVED your story! i couldn't stop laughing or/and crying!! it was the best inuyasha fic i ever read, i REALLY mean it ^~^ i was sure from the start that she was going to die from sure... you really suprised me at the end... anyway, your story as far from great ^.~ Ja ne! Ofir (ofiri_gal@iol.co.il)
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Reviewed By: ladygizarme On: October 22, 2004 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm so happy with the way u went on this! u still managed an extremely happy ending even while giving the proper attention to the reality of death. ur one of my fav authors now after now having read 3 of your works keep up the great work
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Reviewed By: ficfan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2004 21:14 EDT
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wow that was great, i even cried!
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