| "In Fair Verona..." Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: deunan On: August 04, 2003 07:48 CDT
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very enjoyable. Naughty Schu indeed. I loved the last line. Poor Yohji being toyed with. |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 11:07 CDT
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Wai! What a naughty boy Schuldig is. ^_^ Hey...I think I dated him once! *LOL*
Great little piece, thanks for writing it! It really adds something to the story. |
Reviewed By: Dani B [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 16:22 CDT
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Now you need just one more part after Schu leaves Yohji and comes home and Brad gives him the look. We do want so much want to know what amuses Brad, after all.
Okay, not really, but it was worth the try. Enjoyed this story, though I usually love my stories starting out angst-y and ending all fluffy. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 15, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! An IC Schu! Him and his sadistic ways. ^_^ Nicely done on this POV. And this also gives us a good idea on how he's (Schu) is feeling about this ordeal and Yohji's feelings. :D |
Reviewed By: Xellas M. [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent description of very grown-up and complex emotions. I liked the ending a lot, it fit the story well.
I would really love to see a companion piece, from Schu's POV. It would be interesting to know what he is thinking through this. |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 15, 2003 08:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snicker* It wasn't exactly fluffy, but I can cope, I liked it anyway. ^_^ Nicely done. :) XD I'm a fan of your S x Y fics. *thumbs up* |
Reviewed By: Pandora.81 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 07:18 CDT
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Ohhh!!! Another one of your great fictions! ^-^
I'd love to see a happy ending since I just love them. ^^'
Well, or you just post both alternate endings. ^^
btw I know the problem with the disturbing people all to well. *sighs* Uhm... on the other hand I probably shouldn't write my fics in the office. ^.~ |
Reviewed By: kenderlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 22:10 CDT
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I want both!! I'd prefer to see a happy Schu/Yohji, but I'd like to read both possibilities... |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 14, 2003 16:34 CDT
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*sniffle* Poor Yohji...he always gets dooped like that with Schu on these 'one night things.' I vouch for a happy ending...I love fluffy things. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: waltzsend On: April 14, 2003 15:09 CDT
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Very interesting story. I can't wait till you put up the 3rd part. Poor Yotan :*(I hope it's a happy ending). |
Reviewed By: Miss J On: April 14, 2003 07:34 CDT
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waah..
you definately MUST continue it!!
can't wait for another Y/S-ness!!
^o^ |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 13, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm, very interesting. This is the first time I've read something like this. Again, very interesting. I can't wait to see where this heads. It seems like it'll be real good, so continue soon. ^_^ *thumbs up* |
