| "Three Yamis and a Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zoey hellmaster On: December 10, 2003 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an extremely good story!!!!
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Reviewed By: al On: November 27, 2003 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For some unknown reason i thought that the Bakura picking the lock thing was hilarious. The lemon was kind of confusing but thankfully long. And i am definitely reading your other fics if you have more lemons.
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Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 00:22 CST
Comment/Review:
font colorYay! Perfect song, once again my friend! *giggle* im so looking forward to the wedding, coudl there be second thougths coming back? But anyway nice remiscing you had going, it was so sweet, emtionful, il be getting good sleep tonigth because of you and all the cutness and old friendship stuff going on...OMG I SOUND LIKE ANZU!!! ahhhhhhhh!!!! *bashes myself over hte head with a fryign pan* ahh much better, love much it was great so very great...makes me question will Marik run away dont run away from the good future Marik, it will be okay or at least i hope so right...??*slips into sweet unconisouness* KURA!!!!!!!!!!! lmao love!
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Title: Damn!
Reviewed By: Renangel On: September 15, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dang! I luved this! Can u do a sqeuel but with Seto instead of Ryu? I don't think I've ever seen one like that. :P |
Title: COOLNES
Reviewed By: CynicalSpiritValea [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2003 22:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was soo great! Man! that was like such a great it was soo erotic..*drools* im startign toget his thing for more than 2 of them but it was so great and so graphicy and even if you dont think so i give you a ten all around because just..wozers!!!!!COOLNESS!!!!!! never leave anyone with marik, bakura, and yami its juts bound to be trouble but good trouble! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yuuuuuuuuuuuummmy! Hey you ming helping me with my GW lemon's sometime!? I get reviews saying they ain't long, nor... Erotic enough! YOU RULE |
Reviewed By: jxxxl On: July 14, 2003 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhhhhhhh woooow did you write about what you want to do? or what you did? it sounds like fun
well you have openend my eyes to more fun in bed with more people i just might do it to night with some of my guy friends hint hint lololololol ;) |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 07:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lazy grin* next time can you slip some toys in?
I loved the lead up and the end. Ehehehehe, its not often the boys faint from the sex. *eechi grin* poor Ryou... gotta feel jealous, three sexy bishounen.... sex... dirty dancing... nighttime cuddles...
*romantic sigh* It's hard to find a coupling of more than two *mmms* with good sex.
Although that was nicely erotic I think you should write a few more foursomes, purely to master such a fiction and having nothing to do with pevertedness, honestly.
*winks* Keep up the facinating work! |
Reviewed By: Legolas Greenleaf72 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
100% pure Erotica City. I wish all lemons were like that. Not to mention, this gave me an idea for one of the lemons in my current fic. I owe it all to you. |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 12:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wheee!!! That was too much fun! I love reading the happy stories! Yugioh stories have as of late become very angsty...not that that's bad, but the humorous stories make me happy!
I love Ryou to death, but why is Yugi never included in the orgies? ::glomps her Yugi doll:: |
Reviewed By: duos_bunny On: April 24, 2003 22:17 CDT
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*wink* very nice! very nice! ^.~
*snickers* keep yami mailk away from the squirrls....reminds me of that inncendent with my friend! well i hope u write more stories soon!^^*drools at the leather ryou image*
~bunny~ |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 16:12 CDT
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You, my dear are wonderful. Simply fucking wonderful. And sorry to bakurasgirl, but you've been replaced as the best lemon writer ever. hato_chiisai is. Whoah. Need more! PS, Do you do any other pairings? I mean besides Ryou and the entire world?? (Not that I'm complaining! ^_~ ) |
Reviewed By: shadow_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 21:23 CDT
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me:o_O
chinxy:O_o
my friendsand me and chinxy:*are sppechless*wow!
great!!!!!hahahahhaha*all talk about how coolit was*keep up the work! |
Reviewed By: bakurasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 05:24 CDT
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I had to review this becasue it's dedicated to me and I love it and you are my idol and I love your writing and your style and your....just I love everything! |
Reviewed By: NIta On: April 17, 2003 11:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
i can some up my reaction in this
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