| "Three Yamis and a Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: jgal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 07:41 CST
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..oh god, it's erotic all right... god...
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 20:36 CDT
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one word WOW!! that was amazing. i loved it. now ill have to do that in bed with a rope thing.i hope you keep writting
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 03:05 CDT
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By the way, I've done that "In bed with a rope" thing to all of my fortune cookies ever since I first read this fic, and my favorite one I've had was: "You have several hidden talents which will be revealed...in bed with a rope." You totally got me hooked on doing it, and I in turn hooked all of my friends, so thank you for adding a never ending joy to our lives since I eat asian food about 2-3 times a week.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know, no matter how many times I've read it, this story just never loses its flavor. I know I've read this particular lemon at LEAST seven times, and I will continue reading it just because it is THAT good. In fact, you have inspired me to write an orgy fic of my own...just for the hell of it. So it is now official, when I post my new fic "Good Pet" next week on my live journal, it is officially dedicated to you! I love all your stories, I just can't wait for more, so get writing!
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Reviewed By: rayven2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 09:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! Do another!!!
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Reviewed By: vixinkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how you ended that!!! Keith got beat up yay!!!! All the duelists go there huh??? Poor Ryou he got ganged up on by the three sex crazed yamis. You were right that is the most erotic thing I think you've ever written. Could you update Burning see please. I remember when you had it on ff.net and you were at chapter 16. Until next time!
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Reviewed By: orangeaura868 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good fic and it was really cool how all the Yamis and Hikaris were together. I really liked it and hope you can write more. I'm sorry you got banned from fanfiction.net and hope that maybe they'll let you back on. Gomen...I'm rambling...anyway...write more when you can!
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Reviewed By: lost light On: August 18, 2004 02:20 CDT
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you now love people don't review when you don't up date . try witiing a another sstorie and make it q leom your a reeal good leom writter sssee ya
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Reviewed By: telynaayuri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 16:52 CDT
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I love this story. This is the most sexy story that I have ever read and trust me I read a lot. Please make a sequel?
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Reviewed By: Ochemar On: June 10, 2004 15:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could read this story again and again... In bed with a rope!HAHAHAHA!Gomen!That fortune cookie ending was too damn funny for words!
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Reviewed By: Narratress On: March 25, 2004 09:04 CST
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Whahaha that was great.. more people should write these kind of fics :D
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 03:18 CST
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Yeah I'm reviewing it again! i do this every so often when I really like a fic! And as you can tell I really like yours... You should execise that talent of yours more often, you are a great lemon writer!
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Title: Yaoi
Reviewed By: Kari Akutenshi On: March 13, 2004 23:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this fic because, well, it was just original, creative and sweet the way the yami's care for Ryou even though they screwed him good.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon (not signed on) On: January 28, 2004 17:13 CST
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Lemony goodness! At the end I had two thoughts in my head: 1-Do i feel jealous of Ryou? 2-Thank all that is good I'm not in Yugi's group that walked in! What does that mean? I loved your fic! Adios!
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Reviewed By: MichiruT On: January 04, 2004 17:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic to read, 100% lemony goodness and what can be better then that? I love the part where Malik tells Ryou to keep Marik away from squirrels, that cracked me up! I suggest a sequal =^_^=
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