| "Bittersweet Goodbye's" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 17:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm impressed. You've managed to a wonderful job portraying Yugi, Yami's and the gangs grief without being overly melodramatic or sappy. The YxY relationship is sweet and a much needed bit of fluff in a story that's been rather sad.
Looking forward to more,
Icz |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 10:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Yay for friends.
LD: *snickers* I wouldn't have thought that Bakura could carry Yugi, but then I remembered how small Yugi is.
Karen: That isn't nice. Bakura is a good friend.
LD: Yeah, yeah. Boohoo, Yugi is sad, can we get to the good stuff please? ^_~
Karen: Humph. This is good stuff. It is touching. I love it.
LD: Yeah, I guess it is good angst. I do love the horribly tragic stuff. There are just too many hints of, well, citrusy goodness, and I am getting impatient.
Karen: Good things come to those who wait.
LD: Question is *gasps melodramatically* How much longer must we wait? |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Guardians [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is four thumbs up!! I love it!! It's soo full of twists and turns!! Please continue, I love it so much I can't bear if this wasn't continued!! I love this fic so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*~Queen of the Guardians~*~ |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Please continue! It's both bittersweet and nostalgic -- a truly whimsical creation. I applaud you! PLEASE CONTINUE! I think you've done an awesome job with characterization and the Yami/Yugi line is going really well! Haha. ^_^
Update soon and fast! |
Reviewed By: randomasdf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an AWESOME story - so full of emotion, and the way you write it makes it 10x better! ^.^ I love the Yami/Yugi paring - I LOVE where this is going. I like how Yugi "accidently" confesses his love to Yami. Keep up the GREAT work! ^.^
~Randomasdf~ |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 09:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: YAY!
LD: Ok, I like that, it was not the heartfelt, overly dramatized confession. It was awkward and accidental, the way it would most likely happen in real-life.
Karen: You are so unromantic LD. That was a beautiful confession on Yami's part.
LD: Bah. * smirks * It really is good, though. It is nice that even Yami Bakura is being supportive.
Karen: More soon? Please! |
Reviewed By: niffe On: April 16, 2003 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woah, poor Yugi. This is such a good reading expience. I can't wait till the next chapter |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Oh, that is so sad.
LD: * crying * That is terrible. How could you do that?
Karen: At least he still has his friends.
LD: And Yami.
Karen: * nods * Please update again soon. This is really good, except for being horribly tragic. |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: April 14, 2003 16:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh!!! I *love* Yami/Yugi stories! Please write more of this! I enjoyed reading it.... |
Reviewed By: somebody On: April 14, 2003 13:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
niiice *purrs* i was wondering who are you gonna get yugi get together with...but anyways - i'm waiting for the next chapter |
Reviewed By: Black-Winged Angel On: April 13, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful write. You have a great way of describing things. 'like a vultre being dragged backwards through a cheese grater' *chuckles* That was good. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Yui [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, poor Yugi-chan! It really sucks to get sick like that. I must have some immune defficiency or something, cause I get that kinda crap all the time. Anyways, great chapter, write another one soon! I hope my contribution gtes it out that much sooner! How many more do you need now? 1, 2? I know! I'll review again! Wheeeee! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 21:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sounds cool so far. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 20:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
His voice sounded like someone dragging a vulture backwards through a cheese grater? *laughs hysterically* Good job! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 19:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice start. Looking forward to reading more. |
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