| "Bittersweet Goodbye's" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: February 26, 2005 11:17 CST
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Everyone likes your fiction so why mcg't you oh I mcg't know......UPDATE!! This is really good and I loved both lemons they were so sweet! There is a growing (or fading, I'm looking at the fics from earliest to latest updates)number of Yugi seme fics out there. I really really really want to read the Bakura/Yami Bakura lemon! So please get it out as soon a possible! You might have died and/or lost you inspiration for fanfics but I beg of you not to stop! Way to many exclaimation points but I'm really really really excited about this. I've never seen one based around Grandpa's death, I mean a bunch of people have included it but yours really makes it seem real. Plus you have no amound of corn like "Yami my heart aches; Oh hold me!" No really I acually saw that once. Love your writing style and can't (though I have to) wait for your next update even though it's been two years nearly. Trust my I will come after you with a flame thrower as soon as my mom gives it back.......hmm I wonder what happened to my dad...... Over all just please know this is a great story! Thank You DK;) P.S. Please know that I fully except you rights to discontinue this fic even if I will cry. *sob sob* Also look at Dragon dreamer YAmi dragon's fics. Most pairing include Honda/Triston and joey but you would love The Darkness in the Light(just type in 'darkness because it won't let you find any of their stories easily except 'Coin Toss' Try them! Gomen for long review.
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Reviewed By: The Red Wind On: January 24, 2004 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A stunning story, you have, Watari-sama. And as much angst as you have made this plot have, a added so much love and heat-warming moments. And believe me when I say, This was the best fan fiction I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: ahorse [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 22:08 CST
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Watari's girl, you must write that other lemon! Bakura/Yami Bakura. Loved your Zoids fic, after all this time it's still one of my favorites!(You might want to double check your punctuation though, commas are a good thing!) ahorse
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Reviewed By: Scarlett Ding On: June 25, 2003 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an great story there!
Need 2 fix the spelling & grammer though(not trying 2 say I'm a good speller or anything, cause I'm not!), but overall it was good.
It was truely a great story, very enjoyable!
Keep writing there!!! |
Reviewed By: lady_dranzer On: June 10, 2003 22:41 CDT
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LOVE THE FIC!!!!!! go along wit th bakura/yami bakura lemon :D |
Reviewed By: Rin-Rin On: June 05, 2003 15:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I lve the story I know its angst but some parts made me laugh. I love it update soon. |
Reviewed By: Yami/Yugi On: May 29, 2003 21:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(pant pant pant) Oh.. My... God! I'm horny from that lemon you are a really good no GREAT lemon writer! I personally think you should do another lemon and do with Bakura an Yami Bakura because I'd love a lemon with them in it in the next chapter. PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: May 08, 2003 02:57 CDT
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I love this! So kawaii and so much Lemon fun lately. ^_^ Arigato for that. This is cool and I hope you have lots more soon! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: FairysGift On: May 06, 2003 06:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been hunting the internet for months to find a fic like yours!!! Its FANTASTIC !! I hope you update soon . I think the idea of a Bakura/Ryou fic is one which you should go ahead with and see how it works out . Good luck!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkSpirit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 15:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wai! I really like this story. ^^ You've portrayed both Yami and Yugi greatly. It's a very emotional story that has a tragedy that a lot of people never really write about. It's great! I love it! |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 17:45 CDT
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I'm impressed. You've managed to a wonderful job portraying Yugi, Yami's and the gangs grief without being overly melodramatic or sappy. The YxY relationship is sweet and a much needed bit of fluff in a story that's been rather sad.
Looking forward to more,
Icz |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 10:10 CDT
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Karen: Yay for friends.
LD: *snickers* I wouldn't have thought that Bakura could carry Yugi, but then I remembered how small Yugi is.
Karen: That isn't nice. Bakura is a good friend.
LD: Yeah, yeah. Boohoo, Yugi is sad, can we get to the good stuff please? ^_~
Karen: Humph. This is good stuff. It is touching. I love it.
LD: Yeah, I guess it is good angst. I do love the horribly tragic stuff. There are just too many hints of, well, citrusy goodness, and I am getting impatient.
Karen: Good things come to those who wait.
LD: Question is *gasps melodramatically* How much longer must we wait? |
Reviewed By: Queen of the Guardians [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is four thumbs up!! I love it!! It's soo full of twists and turns!! Please continue, I love it so much I can't bear if this wasn't continued!! I love this fic so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
~*~Queen of the Guardians~*~ |
Reviewed By: maladyrancor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! Please continue! It's both bittersweet and nostalgic -- a truly whimsical creation. I applaud you! PLEASE CONTINUE! I think you've done an awesome job with characterization and the Yami/Yugi line is going really well! Haha. ^_^
Update soon and fast! |
Reviewed By: randomasdf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an AWESOME story - so full of emotion, and the way you write it makes it 10x better! ^.^ I love the Yami/Yugi paring - I LOVE where this is going. I like how Yugi "accidently" confesses his love to Yami. Keep up the GREAT work! ^.^
~Randomasdf~ |
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