| "The Taming" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 18:26 CDT
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(Jeez, how many times can I say 'so'?) :) |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 18:19 CDT
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Ember, where the heck did you come up with the idea for this fic? It's amazing!
I'm so engrossed in it already, and I can see so many plots forming.
Girl, I'm so awestruck of your talent, both as an artist and as a writer. I'm so glad you've chosen to share your gifts with this fandom. :)
Thanks, Kiddo! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:21 CDT
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Wow I love it so far. Bradock, Goku and Vegeta yummy :) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 08:50 CDT
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So far so good! :) I liked how Vegeta acted as if the Earthlings were infected. It just seemed to fit. I'm curious to see how things will progress. And what will Bardock come to think of all this? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Well, I certainly like this better than your V/B's. It's certainly different, however, there isn't enough to tell me whether it's going to be good yet. Good for a prologue. More. Um, somehow your writing style seemed off here.... *shrugs* I don't know. May be just me. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: April 14, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hope it's OK?
It's perfect...just like everything else you do!
I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhhhh... I didn't realise you'd posted!!! I wanted to state in public how much I loved this, and what a delight it was to read!! It's so beautifully written, and it has the sexiest creature in the universe in it... BARDOCK!!! Erm, sorry... back to story... I love the way the story is told from Vegeta's POV... I always like first person stories. Really looking forwrd to chapter two!!! :D |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 13:54 CDT
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mmmm.... I'm interested! |
Reviewed By: kodachi On: April 14, 2003 11:04 CDT
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Very well done- I would like to read more of it, therefor keep it up!
Good start and itīs really intrigueing. (I like the Bradock-Vegeta tension and Kakarottīs, ups sorry I mean Gokuīs reaction to Vegetaīs first approach.)
-Funny that Vegeta keeps calling it `itī even though it has an identification ^-^
-kodachi- |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 10:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!! Another AMAZING piece of fan fiction from Ember!! So beautifully written, the plot line is wonderful so far (very original!!), and holds a lot of promise! Can't wait to read more!! |
Reviewed By: agent 182 On: April 13, 2003 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it so far. I can't wait til you put up the next chapter ;)Hmm Goku a king that's new and enjoyable great job |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 21:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, VERY interesting! I've never come across a ficcy quite like this one and you're writing skills are fantastic :) I can't wait to see how this developes! |
Reviewed By: ^_^ On: April 13, 2003 20:47 CDT
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Prettiful... Okay, not the most intricate way to review, but I'm tired and just wanting to get the point across: Continue and update! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: EmberMaxximus [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 20:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've caught my attention. Great start, Ember! I can't wait to see how this piece grows.
~EM |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
... that you're not going to be able to update this fast enough, Ember!
What a great start - here's another one I know I'll be addicted to! |
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