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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2004 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY ... FUCKING ... SHIT!!!!! WOW!!!!! Unfrickingbelieveable. This is the... Words are useless in describing this story. WOW!!!! I bow to you. This *points to the pages* is amazing. It's beatutiful, It's well written, God I wish you had more. I thought I was doing fairly good job at creating Saiyan Culture for my own fic but I am now bowing to the master. I loved the Super Saiyan creation myth, the way it read like a bible passage or an EPIC poem, and the entire Oral History thing. I also enjoyed the insite you used in highlighting the differences between Goku's and Vegeta's thought processes in how they mourn thier dead. What do they say? never discuss politics or religion? I really enjoy the angle you are approaching your story from. I don't know if you are still writing or even if you'll ever read this but thank you for writing this story.
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Title: The Taming
Reviewed By: amadeo395 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This one is incredible and very complex. But please please please keep up on it. Since May is a long time to wait for another chapter.
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Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's funny how ones writing can have a acquiescent effect on anothers embrangled mind, although I don't entirely discommend yaoi, I'd be canarding if I said.. Please don't perdure.. 0o'
Please do continue! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: May 26, 2003 19:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love where you are taking this story. I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happrns next! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: May 22, 2003 10:42 CDT
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Things are getting more complicated. I love it! Vegeta pining over Bardock! Ha ha. That's great. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Ember, you know how much I loved this. What an original storyline! Absolutely brilliant! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 18:26 CDT
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(Jeez, how many times can I say 'so'?) :) |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2003 18:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ember, where the heck did you come up with the idea for this fic? It's amazing!
I'm so engrossed in it already, and I can see so many plots forming.
Girl, I'm so awestruck of your talent, both as an artist and as a writer. I'm so glad you've chosen to share your gifts with this fandom. :)
Thanks, Kiddo! |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 20:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow I love it so far. Bradock, Goku and Vegeta yummy :) |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 08:50 CDT
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So far so good! :) I liked how Vegeta acted as if the Earthlings were infected. It just seemed to fit. I'm curious to see how things will progress. And what will Bardock come to think of all this? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I certainly like this better than your V/B's. It's certainly different, however, there isn't enough to tell me whether it's going to be good yet. Good for a prologue. More. Um, somehow your writing style seemed off here.... *shrugs* I don't know. May be just me. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: April 14, 2003 20:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You hope it's OK?
It's perfect...just like everything else you do!
I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gahhhhh... I didn't realise you'd posted!!! I wanted to state in public how much I loved this, and what a delight it was to read!! It's so beautifully written, and it has the sexiest creature in the universe in it... BARDOCK!!! Erm, sorry... back to story... I love the way the story is told from Vegeta's POV... I always like first person stories. Really looking forwrd to chapter two!!! :D |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 13:54 CDT
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mmmm.... I'm interested! |
Reviewed By: kodachi On: April 14, 2003 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very well done- I would like to read more of it, therefor keep it up!
Good start and itīs really intrigueing. (I like the Bradock-Vegeta tension and Kakarottīs, ups sorry I mean Gokuīs reaction to Vegetaīs first approach.)
-Funny that Vegeta keeps calling it `itī even though it has an identification ^-^
-kodachi- |
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