"Picture Perfect" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:17 CST Comment/Review: My oppinion: companion piece and the prequel. I've gotta read s'more of your fics!!
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:13 CST Comment/Review: Ooooohh! Getting more plot I like this fic alot gotta read more o' your stuff.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 17:11 CST Comment/Review: Hmm. Very good chap. My sister reccomended this fic. Glad she did.
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Reviewed By: Airen On: April 17, 2003 19:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Awwww! That was too cute. I just love 1x2, and that was a really nicely done fic. Good job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 19:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Short but too adorable. |
Reviewed By: Terrasa On: April 16, 2003 19:27 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Awwww, I love endings!! Yet I hate them at the same time. That is why I think you 'really' should do the companion piece!
Anyways! Congrats of finishing the story! It was very, very cute and not too mushy! In other words, it was perfect. ^.^ *sigh* I want a Heero too!
~Terrasa |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 14:27 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: I like how they meet. Duo sick and Heero wanting to leave. |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 22:53 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I adore this fic! You must write more soon! ah, I can't believe I only just read it, I saw it here a while back and meant to read it, but was too busy. Still, now I want more anyways, so get cracking!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: April 14, 2003 22:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: YYYYYeeeeeaaahhhhhhh,...*grins*...duo FFiinnnaalllyyyy meet heero face-to-face,...*clap-clap*...CCCCoonntiinueeeeeeee soon kay,...and keep-up the good work,...and LLooooovvveeee those mini picture of heero that duo put inside his walet,...quite CCuuteeee,....*grins*,...UUppppdaaattteddddddddd soon,...till yer-next new chapter,..JJaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbaattteeeeeeeee-Neeeeeeeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Terrasa On: April 14, 2003 21:54 CDT Comment/Review: Well that was fast! I only had to wait a couple hours before being treated once again to a lovely chappy!
Duo finally met Heero! I'm soooo glad! And it wasn't a horribly embarrasing moment which would have been... well, horribly embarrasing! Great job! I loved the Duo getting sick part, and how Heero seems to like him even when he is in that messy state. Wonderful, wonderful! Can't wait for the epilogue! Must have some kisses! At least one! Gya! ^.^
Don't leave me hanging for too long!
~Terrasa |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:50 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Kawaii! This fic idea is too cute. I can't wait to read about Heero & Duo meeting! |
Reviewed By: terrasa On: April 14, 2003 16:01 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: OOOo! I like! Duo and Heero are going to meet soon! I can't wait! This is a really enjoyable story and I sooo wanna read the rest. Duo's reaction to seeing Heero will definitely be shocking. And then, Heero must already know who Duo is... because he was supposedly staring at him before.. or was that really Heero? Or just some guy with pretty eyes? Ugh! >.<
I think I was grinning the whole time during the Trowa/Duo meeting. And I thought Duo and Quatre's conversations were 'very' amusing, which is a first. He's not some wimpy boy in this fic which I am 'really' glad about.
Overall I thought this is starting off great! Keep it up, and hope the next parts are out soon!/font>
~Terrasa |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: April 14, 2003 07:42 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WWWWWWWoooooWWWWWWWWW,...this fic of yours is TTTTTooottaalllyyyyyyy AAAAmmmaaaazziiingggggggggg,...*gape*...i LLLLooooooovvvveeeeeeee it,...ya've to continue soon,..PPPPllleeeassseeeeeeeeeeeeee???......*puppy-dog-eyes*...UUUpppdaatedddddd Soooooooonnnnnn,...OOOnnneeeggaaaiiiii???...i LLoooooovvvveeeeee how ya make duo and quatra here,...they're best friends and best buddies,...*grins*...and trowa SSSSpppeeaakkkssss,...NOT like his usual "mute" self,....and quite SSaaaappyyyy with quatra Neee???...*wink,wink*...the down-side of this fic is no heero,...*pout*..YET,...i'm DDDDyyiinggggg for ya to make his appearance in poor duo life,....OOOhhhhhh,...HHHuuurryyyyyyy-Uppppp with MMMoorrreeeeee Neeewwwww Chhhaaaapptersssssssss,...OOnnnnneeeggggaaaiii??....keep-up the good work kay,...till next time,..JJJaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaaannbbaaattteeeeeeeee-Neeeee!!^.~!!
p/s:heero SSSSuureeee looks Daaammnnnnn
SSeeexxyyyyyyy in that full-body picture quatra make,...*drools*...and could ya consider a bit of maybe lime or lemon mix-in this fic???...just a suggestion,...*evil hentai grins*...^_~... |