| "A Rabbit's Tale Of First Love" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: Awww!
Reviewed By: Kate the InuYoukai01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think you should continue with this. It's a good story and the originality of the pairing gives it an even more interesting quality! ^_^ You also expressed the problem with Akito and the Sohma curse, and I like that. Sometimes people don't add that in their stories. I give you my luck with your other stories and hope that you continue this one soon. I truly believe you have started a pairing which will become very popular in the end. Best regards, Kate the Inuyoukai01
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Reviewed By: Manga Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2006 05:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^ I think Momiji is going to have his own fan girl's soon! I'd love to see more to this! Great job.
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Reviewed By: momiji_sohma_gal [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 10:50 CDT
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wow lol great job! you should continue the story! anyway, keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Kiyonekage On: July 01, 2005 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes! i never saw Momiji as the type to go all...manly...wow...surprising how we all grow up...HA!! Listen to me...and i never thought i'd make it past 16 years old before i died or the Earth exploded...now look at me...17 years old and planning for her Senior year of High School...Damn, where'd the years go? WEll, anyway, back to the story...it was good...Hatori had a point...the last line was so fitting to the life of the cursed Sohmas...Damn Akito...Kill the MOFO! Hatori could too...whoa...i never thought about that...i should write a story where Ha'ri kills Akito!!!*Laughes like an evil madman* I get the greatest ideas when i'm bored...Wow...Thanks...this story is now being proclaimed inspirational...Later
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Reviewed By: ElfMousey On: April 25, 2005 09:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story because Momiji is my favorite character in Fruits Basket! I have not seen any other story that was based on a Momiji and Tohru relationship, so it was really fun to read. I hope you continue the story. I LOVED IT!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2004 23:14 CST
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I wish more people would write tohru and Momiji pairings. This was great!
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Reviewed By: ehu On: December 08, 2003 00:43 CST
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this fic was awesome! a story involving momiji becoming an adult would be something wonderful to elaborate on more! so yes, a continuation would be a good thing! he could experience all the pangs of adulthood, and we can be there to watch!
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, kool. this fic is pretty neat. i hope theres more, id really like to see that. momiji is kawaii, ne? its time he grew up... though i liked the childish momiji, i guess it be really weird if he didnt change. if theres more, is akito gonna come into this? and yuki and kyo? |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww that was cute! I seriously gasped when I read the very last part though! That was sad! I hope you continue this fic! |
Reviewed By: Victoria On: April 17, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this, being a fan of odd pairings, but it seems to OOC to be anything other than a one shot. Good job and if you rally like odd pairings my favorite Fruba OP is Haru/Kyo, maybe you could write one like this for them? |
Reviewed By: chica56 On: April 14, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Pretty interesting. I think it is a first. I you want to, which i strongly suggest, continue please. |
