| "Seeing Stars" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: i like it!!
Reviewed By: pink_candy [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 12:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm really enjoying this story..but PLEASE UPDATE!!!! there's only one thing i seem to be having a problem with...how weak you made Hotaru. I know she's weak, and isn't that strong. But this is Sailor Saturn we're talking about. regardless of the fact that you took the "scout" out of her..she still has determination when she or someone she cares for are put in danger. you kinda made her seem...dependent and needy...i dunno..other then that..i really like this story..so again, PLEASE UPDATE!! lol. thanks.
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Title: Wonderful
Reviewed By: Katara [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2005 20:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
his is a great story. Please write more^^
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
AAAH!!! Chapter 22... Well, I don't have to wait for the next chapter...
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 15:08 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. This is going great. I like how you've developed the two stories and the relationship between Darien and Serena. And also the relationship between Amy and Jason. (But where did Mina go? I'd thought that she'd want to be kept updated with how Darien's filming is going.)
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 14:26 CST
Comment/Review:
it's a real great story -there is absolutely no big flaw here.. I can't for my life figure out why it's not as popular as it deserves to be (people are lazy I guess...)
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 14:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Sixth chapter was great as well...
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 14:05 CST
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I liked the sight into Serena's thoughts in chapter 5. Makes her more realistic.. :)
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 13:51 CST
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Second chapter: no new twist, but I like it. However.. how come you made Serena so OOC? Fits the plot that way, I guess. Still, I think you need to back up her character a bit.
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Reviewed By: Danaë [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2003 13:43 CST
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the first chapter is nice. An interesting beginning. It's interesting how you switched their personalities "high-and mighty Serena" and Darien "scared as a little bunny".
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