| "Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Mimiheart [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going, great start. You may want to consider changing the web formating, it's a little choppy right now.
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Reviewed By: Ryasha On: June 12, 2003 16:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waah! Keep going! I really like it so far! I love stories where Yugi isn't so 'innocent'! Update soon! Please! |
Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh!! ::tattoos patience on her forehead, and sits and waits::
I like it a lot so far!! Keep on writing! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 22:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start! ^_^ |
