| "A Passage in Time" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Demon Bakura(no email) On: February 17, 2004 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is a good fanfic, and I think you should write more and/or finish it. It's really good and I liked it. Please write more(hits floor. On knees begging) Demon Bakura
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Reviewed By: Kitiara On: August 17, 2003 10:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooooo... this is very kewl! Please make another chapie! (eyes get all big and watery) |
Reviewed By: Reuka-chan On: July 14, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope your reading this because you must continue this story. Its only been one chapter (and it was so short) and i'm already hooked. I have to say this is one of the best fics i've ever read in my whole life you must continue( i really hope your reading this) this is the start of something great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! If i could I'd give it a 20:) |
Reviewed By: Zoey Hellmaster On: June 14, 2003 21:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
This fic looks great so far! You should really continue it! Yum....Bakura and Malik...*drool* |
Reviewed By: shaya On: April 15, 2003 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is good but dont end it on such a good part like that . but write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Pretty kitty On: April 15, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this will turn out great,
I LOVE MALIK!!! |
Reviewed By: lovin' this story On: April 15, 2003 16:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep writting you are on a roll. |
