| "United Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 11:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are evil. That was the most methodically written piece of work I have ever read. And you tied up all the 'loose ends' (pun intended) very nicely. You did a wonderful job with the family dynamics with all the pilots and they kids you created. I enjoyed this story greatly (even if it did take a week to read). I applaud your dedication to finishing all your stories and writing sequals to many of them just to keep us guessing. **stands and bows** A job well done.
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Reviewed By: renee_dmrs [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 17:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Bubonic Plague???
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what an interesting ending, I was thinking that maybe Une would adopt Fayah. I was so happy that they got to Shane in time. wahoo I enjoyed the story very much and thank you for sharing it. Sheesh I'm still a bit I dunno... duo just dislocated his wrist like that, poped it back in place and thought nothing of it. hmm like heero setting his own leg. (^_^)
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Title: Duo
Reviewed By: Duo's Slave On: September 17, 2003 22:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLease write soon I want to know what happens next. I hate being left at clif hanger. so not fair. I love your work it is good. |
Reviewed By: Zefyr On: June 17, 2003 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really can't get the hang of the whole numbers thing, btw. That just seems awfully arbitrary.
But anyway... There aren't any flaws so bad I'll ignore the story, and you've got a good handle on bouncing from perspective to perspective, which is crucial to building tension. The story's complex enough, as well, which is a plus. The only part that makes me think borderline-OOC is the amount of physical affection. I just never got the impression that Heero and Duo (but Heero more so, *especially* having a Japanese background/heritage) would be as openly affectionate in front of other people. Perhaps this is also because I see them as fellow warriors first and lovers second, which I'd interprete would mean they'd drop into the oldest and most familiar mode around other people (although I can see them being completely passionate once in private).
Other than that detail... you ARE going to keep going, aren't you? Keep writing, or suffer the consequences! Don't let it end here! *sniffle* |
Reviewed By: Lein On: April 19, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great fic. I love the interacton between the kids and the pilots. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 15, 2003 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! I'm so glad you decided to continue this! It seems that everything can't be quite perfect. Can we see what happens to Quatre and Trowa and Benny and Toby!!!???? Please I really want to know what happens! I hope you write more of this story soon!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Lethanon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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haha! This si great so far....addictive start...hmm...I love 1x2x1...so yummy. But when's Quatre gonna get dragged into it, and his new youngens...and what's Wufei gonna find out??? And just iamgine the guilt trip Duo's gonna get when he realises he KNEW something was wrong and didn't do a thing aobut it coz Heero's kisses are addictive? HEHEHEHE. More, you know the drill! ;-P |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 08:43 CDT
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woohooo!!! More...duo, shane and heero are so cute together |
