| "A New Threat" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Bugsygurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not too shabby dude. The ending was really sweet, and I normally don't go for the mushy stuff.
You deserve a taco...go eat a taco |
Reviewed By: TriceroDragon On: July 05, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea is great, the concept is all well and good, but the Spelling and Grammar mistakes impede the readability of the writing. |
Reviewed By: Basher-Knux On: June 20, 2003 11:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
cant understand a word, its all packed so tight that its jumbled all over the place man |
Reviewed By: Jiece18 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 09:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story. Can't wait for the next. |
