| "Shinigami's Gem" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: balck beauty On: July 27, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more, write more soon. I love this fic, keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Oni On: July 26, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I love all your fics but I thought I would write a review here to tell you that. Keep writing I can't wait to read more of all your fics. |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy On: July 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story, although i don't really like 5x2 stories (although i am intrigued by the possible 1x6x2 threesome thats been hinted at).
Despite the fact that i like this story, there are some things that i don't really think fit in this story. One is how everything progressed after Wufei cut Duo's hair off. I truly thing that was the worst mistake that Wufei could've made. Something that Duo would never forgive him for. Duo is already skittish about violence b/c of his last master's treatment, and what Wufei did only confirmed to Duo that Wufei is a basterd merc and a cruel master. Therefore, cutting off Duo's hair should either break Duo and/or cause Duo's anger to rise even more. I could hardly believe that Wufei thought that there was any way for him to gain Duo's trust after that. Cutting of his hair was probably the one thing that would garentee that Duo never trusts him.
Anyways, that is my opinion. Take it or leave it. As it is now, i find it unrealistic though. However, i will continue to read your story, since i do like it. :) |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 23, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADD MORE!!!! *dies* |
Reviewed By: Chris On: July 22, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
THE BRAID!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CUT THE BRAID!?!?! ::SOBS:: ::slighty recovers:: Good job by the way...but..::sniff sniff:: THE BRAID...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA ::GASP:: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! ::SOBS AND CONVULSES:: THE BRAID!!! AH, WUFEI WHY!! WHY!!! |
Reviewed By: paranormal On: July 21, 2003 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! why did you chop off his braid!!!! poor duo! *sobs* ok, well i think it's a /wonderful/ story...most definatly keep writing, you're really talented. it can be so hard to find a good story here on mediaminer, but i have to give you credit for coming up with and writing such a brilliant story. can't wait to see when the next chapter comes out!! |
Reviewed By: Flash On: July 18, 2003 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it but WHY THE HAIR????? NOT THE HAIR! IT'S HIS SYMBOL!! urk i wanna kill 'Fei now, even though Duo was kinda asking for it...GAH! |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRR I HATE YOU WUFEI! OF ALL THE DISHONORABLE EVIL THINGS YOU HAD TO CUT HIS BRAID! YOU CAN'T FIX MISTAKES LIKE THAT IT TAKES MORE THAN TEN YEARS TO GROW THAT SORT OF HAIR GODDAM IT GAHHHHHH!!!!! THE BRAID! THE BRAID! **mourns** |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, another chapter, I like this story so far, I feel bad for Duo, his hair, (sob) but I wonder what Wufei is up to with Duo hair??? :) |
Reviewed By: Cath Nye On: July 16, 2003 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Three words... Why. His. Braid? other than that tragic part, great fic! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 16, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made Wufei out to be such a mean person. Poor Dou *snifs*
Anyways, keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: forver01n02 On: July 12, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was awsome. I was waiting for this^^
But now what I was dreading/ waiting for has happended!
gah! It's painful to see you end the chapter like that.
It sets my mind on edge and makes me think of bunches
and bunches of possiblilities of what could happen!
And barely ever right ^^;; I want to read more of this fic!
And soon! Although I realize you have other stuff to
do, really, I should be updating my own fics, but hey
I like reading damn it. Anyway, this is really good,
the color is odd, but it adds something to the fic.
It's very good and I think nit would be a shame to see
this die, so please continue soon ^^
Ja ne,
Katya |
Reviewed By: Ryuu On: July 08, 2003 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm quite glad to see you back in writing action, I was beginning to wonder if you were planning on continuing this fic at all. Hope to see more chapters soon, I love a good AU story, and this is a good AU story. Cheers,
--RyuuGami |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah, I really like it, I can't wait till the next chapter is out. |
Reviewed By: Trista On: July 02, 2003 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More is all I ask. |
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