| "Shinigami's Gem" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: Trista On: July 02, 2003 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More is all I ask. |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't descide if i liked or hated this. Gaah, poor Duo-kun. To be in a situation like that and... uggh!! Bad Wu-kun! Your writing style is very to the point and you could do with more scenary description, your time passage is good, but again you need a bit more description, description of people needs more in it too. But your style is very readable, swallowable too, I look forward to reading more of this story. Duo needs a happy ending or... or... *gasps of horror at the mere thought* |
Reviewed By: Mayarna On: April 16, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say that I think that this is a really good fic so far and I hope that you will be able to write more to the fic soon.
And good luck to you.
Mayarna~ |
Reviewed By: chibivicky On: April 16, 2003 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's good and i really want to know what will happen when Shinigami and Wu Fei meets each other again. |
Reviewed By: Lexicon Katzchen On: July 07, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAH! Update soon please!!! This fic is great, it keeps the reader wanting more; completely captivating. I love how you've developed Duo/Shinigami, even if he had to go through a hard time to get to where he is. I want to know who you're planning on pairing him with - I suggest Wufei, but that might just be because I have this wierd thing about the whole enemy/lover situation. Hmm, again, Great fic! Keep it up!
P.S. Good spelling and Grammar! Yay! I give you all 10's! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 16, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Duo's hair! I can't believe you cut it. ; ; Please continue with this fic soon, and finnish it soon, I don't think I can wait too long. Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, I love the story, Poor, Duo, I can't get over that Wufei cut his hair. But know I am wondering about his past?? can't wait |
Reviewed By: forever01n02 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 06:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, well, I'm not to sure I can get over what you did to Duo's hair...... Although I don't think I'll stop reading, but still.... Anyway, this is still fairly good, I think I'm still a bit in shock, even though I read this a few days ago, like the first day it was posted I think.... anyway, There are a lot of questions unanswered so far, and I want to know what happens next, so update again soon ^^
- forever01n02
(that wasn't a very good review, ne? gomen) |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 16:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a beginning. Very intense, can't wait to read the next chapters. But I've read your work before and it's always been good. Glad to hear you have it written to the end. Most don't bother. |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 11:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
^.^ next chappy plz!!!! |
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