| "Shinigami's Gem" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 22, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Keep it up and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Shizu-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic cant wait for more. great creativity and unique. |
Title: ADD MORE!
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: September 06, 2003 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! YOU MUST CONTINUE SOON! Mwuah! I love you. ^_^ Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 03, 2003 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh I love this fic. I can't get enough of it. Keep up the great job and don't forget to update soon. |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 03, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, Ok, after reading the excuses for making Wufei out to be such as jack ass... I will not complain too much about you portraying him as a bastard. Anyhow, thanks for updating your fic and keep up the great job. |
Reviewed By: Bishoonenlover [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic but if I was Duo I would have KILLED Wufei if he cut my hair.I don't really like long hair but in all the fic's I read about how Duo loves his hair I became attached to it,where the hell as that come from?Anyway I hope you improve on Wufei's attidude because at this point I would be plotting on his slow demise.I mean 'HE ASKED FOR IT?!' |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy On: August 02, 2003 08:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, i know at the end that you said this fic was really dark, but i think that (compaired to the last chapter) it is progressing much more realisticly, although i still hold that you will have to get Wufei to do alot before Duo will trust him again. Almost killing you isn't something that is easily forgiven.
Anyways, i am enjoying the fic! Keep writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Utsukushii Ryu On: July 31, 2003 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good. I can't believe you left me in this kind of suspense! I want to know what happens next. Anywho, you should keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Kae On: July 28, 2003 05:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Had to change my rate on creativity. Poor poor Duo!!!!!!!!! Hope Wuffie stays sexualy frustrated...It would serve 'im right!!! I don't like the hair thing. It erks me. So enjoyment stays kinda under the weather. And the realationship between Duo and Fei is off. The forgetfulness on Duo's part shouldn't have even been possible, their's too much bad blood for Duo to forget WHO he is with.
And..um..well damn!! The hair thing erks ME!!! (sob) Should cut Fei's pony off!! ( grabs super buzz shaver and bowling ball wax) (chases Wuffie and cackles evily) Feel bether now... Like your story, please continue. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kae On: July 28, 2003 04:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man!!! Wufei is a BASTARD!!! Dang!! I like bitchy/sweet Wufei better in all stories!! AND he cut DUO's hair!!!! That's a total ticket to hell...hope fei likes warm weather? Gona miss 'im. Hope Duo has super inhuman hair growth powers?! Maybe? He probly does to have his hair so neat. Mine was always a battle when it was that long. ^_^ I'd probly be driven to murder if someone cut it that short.
Like the story though. Very cool.
Bye-a |
Reviewed By: balck beauty On: July 27, 2003 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
More, more, write more soon. I love this fic, keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Oni On: July 26, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually I love all your fics but I thought I would write a review here to tell you that. Keep writing I can't wait to read more of all your fics. |
Reviewed By: LadyJessy On: July 24, 2003 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story, although i don't really like 5x2 stories (although i am intrigued by the possible 1x6x2 threesome thats been hinted at).
Despite the fact that i like this story, there are some things that i don't really think fit in this story. One is how everything progressed after Wufei cut Duo's hair off. I truly thing that was the worst mistake that Wufei could've made. Something that Duo would never forgive him for. Duo is already skittish about violence b/c of his last master's treatment, and what Wufei did only confirmed to Duo that Wufei is a basterd merc and a cruel master. Therefore, cutting off Duo's hair should either break Duo and/or cause Duo's anger to rise even more. I could hardly believe that Wufei thought that there was any way for him to gain Duo's trust after that. Cutting of his hair was probably the one thing that would garentee that Duo never trusts him.
Anyways, that is my opinion. Take it or leave it. As it is now, i find it unrealistic though. However, i will continue to read your story, since i do like it. :) |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 23, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ADD MORE!!!! *dies* |
Reviewed By: Chris On: July 22, 2003 20:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
THE BRAID!! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO CUT THE BRAID!?!?! ::SOBS:: ::slighty recovers:: Good job by the way...but..::sniff sniff:: THE BRAID...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHA ::GASP:: WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!! ::SOBS AND CONVULSES:: THE BRAID!!! AH, WUFEI WHY!! WHY!!! |
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