| "Shinigami's Gem" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: paranormal On: July 21, 2003 18:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! why did you chop off his braid!!!! poor duo! *sobs* ok, well i think it's a /wonderful/ story...most definatly keep writing, you're really talented. it can be so hard to find a good story here on mediaminer, but i have to give you credit for coming up with and writing such a brilliant story. can't wait to see when the next chapter comes out!! |
Reviewed By: Flash On: July 18, 2003 20:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
love it but WHY THE HAIR????? NOT THE HAIR! IT'S HIS SYMBOL!! urk i wanna kill 'Fei now, even though Duo was kinda asking for it...GAH! |
Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
GRRRRRRRRRR I HATE YOU WUFEI! OF ALL THE DISHONORABLE EVIL THINGS YOU HAD TO CUT HIS BRAID! YOU CAN'T FIX MISTAKES LIKE THAT IT TAKES MORE THAN TEN YEARS TO GROW THAT SORT OF HAIR GODDAM IT GAHHHHHH!!!!! THE BRAID! THE BRAID! **mourns** |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 20:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, another chapter, I like this story so far, I feel bad for Duo, his hair, (sob) but I wonder what Wufei is up to with Duo hair??? :) |
Reviewed By: Cath Nye On: July 16, 2003 20:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Three words... Why. His. Braid? other than that tragic part, great fic! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: July 16, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You made Wufei out to be such a mean person. Poor Dou *snifs*
Anyways, keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: forver01n02 On: July 12, 2003 14:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, that was awsome. I was waiting for this^^
But now what I was dreading/ waiting for has happended!
gah! It's painful to see you end the chapter like that.
It sets my mind on edge and makes me think of bunches
and bunches of possiblilities of what could happen!
And barely ever right ^^;; I want to read more of this fic!
And soon! Although I realize you have other stuff to
do, really, I should be updating my own fics, but hey
I like reading damn it. Anyway, this is really good,
the color is odd, but it adds something to the fic.
It's very good and I think nit would be a shame to see
this die, so please continue soon ^^
Ja ne,
Katya |
Reviewed By: Ryuu On: July 08, 2003 20:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm quite glad to see you back in writing action, I was beginning to wonder if you were planning on continuing this fic at all. Hope to see more chapters soon, I love a good AU story, and this is a good AU story. Cheers,
--RyuuGami |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
ah, I really like it, I can't wait till the next chapter is out. |
Reviewed By: Trista On: July 02, 2003 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More is all I ask. |
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't descide if i liked or hated this. Gaah, poor Duo-kun. To be in a situation like that and... uggh!! Bad Wu-kun! Your writing style is very to the point and you could do with more scenary description, your time passage is good, but again you need a bit more description, description of people needs more in it too. But your style is very readable, swallowable too, I look forward to reading more of this story. Duo needs a happy ending or... or... *gasps of horror at the mere thought* |
Reviewed By: Mayarna On: April 16, 2003 16:44 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've got to say that I think that this is a really good fic so far and I hope that you will be able to write more to the fic soon.
And good luck to you.
Mayarna~ |
Reviewed By: chibivicky On: April 16, 2003 10:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's good and i really want to know what will happen when Shinigami and Wu Fei meets each other again. |
Reviewed By: Lexicon Katzchen On: July 07, 2003 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAH! Update soon please!!! This fic is great, it keeps the reader wanting more; completely captivating. I love how you've developed Duo/Shinigami, even if he had to go through a hard time to get to where he is. I want to know who you're planning on pairing him with - I suggest Wufei, but that might just be because I have this wierd thing about the whole enemy/lover situation. Hmm, again, Great fic! Keep it up!
P.S. Good spelling and Grammar! Yay! I give you all 10's! |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: July 16, 2003 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!! Duo's hair! I can't believe you cut it. ; ; Please continue with this fic soon, and finnish it soon, I don't think I can wait too long. Love & Peace |
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