Reviewed By: Jay On: April 16, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now, I understand that writing is difficult, but if you want to put something on the internet for people to read, please at least TRY to write properly. Your spelling and grammar are terrible. You give no actual description of what's going on, it's mostly dialogue. You frequently use 'cuz' and 'u' instead of ''cause' and 'you' and while that's alright when you're talking with your friends on the internet, in actual writing that just isn't done. Now, don't be upset, everyone has trouble at first when they're new to writing. The key is to try again, but if you aren't willing to really make an effort and put time into your work, it won't improve. |
