| "And Now the Severe Beating of Allen Shezar" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Mary On: August 18, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL!!! SO FUNNY!!! ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER PLEEZE!!!!! I just hate Allen...horny bastard. |
Reviewed By: Kelli Aya Bray On: June 11, 2003 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
T's a great story, only one problem...not enough Allan-beating, needs more blood |
Reviewed By: notOftenReader On: June 11, 2003 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"poor" Allen, not poor Allen in last line of chap.2 :)
Beautiful, if not original. Allen-bashing is so enjoyable! |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great!!! But why did you post it anew? I still love it even though I read it again!! |
