Reviewed By:Irish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 01:45 CDT Comment/Review: Ive noticed that once you get one review other people take the time to notice you. So Im making it look like I have a review in an attempt to get people to read my story :O
Reviewed By:Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2003 13:28 CDT Comment/Review: I love the degree of passion mingled with compassion that Andrew shows here. I enjoy the flash of his hurt feelings when he grasps that Lyn implies he dresses like a bum, but persists in helping Lyn kindly. It's clear he's aware that Lyn is not likely to fall into bed with him because of his assistance and it becomes obvious that Andrew wouldn't want anything so superficial anyway. But to care about someone who pushes him away so persistently? Must be love. I'm glad Andrew is such a stubborn Scandinavian. He raises being stubborn to a virtue.
Lyn is so vulnerable towards the end of the chapter. I love how the endearment "baby" slips out when Andrew talks to him.
