| "The Hot Spot" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shini On: September 19, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^;; well, overall great fanfic, and the guess is.. Power Rangers? ^^;; I hope. |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snigger!* Funny as hell! Love what Yami says in the end.... Fuck the score board though! Kaiba got Yami! I say KAIBA WINS!!!!!! Muhahahahahhahaha *more insane laughyer insues* |
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::manicial giggling/shrieking::
Oh my ::gasp:: GOD!! ::gasp:: That was so hot, funny, sweet and cute.
I love the way you've captured Kaiba in this, and everything from the beginning to Yami smirking and saying that he won at the end.......::snicker/snerk:: Wonderful.
Please, please write some more to this, like the reactions, Kaiba's excuse for not letting Mokuba see the tape, or if Mokuba gets to it first, then having everyone's reactions.
Are they going to keep it secret?
I know this wasn't meant to be a series, but it's just too good to let drop.
Anyway, excellent as always.
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~ |
Reviewed By: Kisho On: June 19, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write another fic i so want to know what mokubas reaction when he watches the tape! I loved this story it was funny, amusing,and god damn sexy! More Seyo/Yami Please! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tenchi On: June 13, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was even better, and no duh, cause it ain't on ff.net! you gotta write more, it's so cute, yet disturbing, but kawaii all the same! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Sin and Yami Phiona On: April 18, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-snickers-
Phiona: OHOH! I KNOW THE SHOW!! ZOIDS!!
-falls over laughing-
Phiona: ^^ AWESOME FIC!! ^_____________^ |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: April 17, 2003 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
That "I won" comment at the end of the story just cracked me up! Poor Seto, he worked so hard to lose anyway. ^_^ Thanks for the fun read! |
Reviewed By: Red Five (You might know me from FF.net) On: April 17, 2003 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
POWER RANGERS! *dies laughing* MOKUBA WAS WATCHING POWER RANGERS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
For the record, I love Seto/Yami fanfics! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Kris On: April 17, 2003 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seto building his own version of twister. Somehow I can see him doing that. Loved the fic, and it's obvious he was watching power rangers. |
Reviewed By: Dragondreamer Yami Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 07:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'll never be able to play Twister again! LOL! |
Reviewed By: Solitaire On: April 16, 2003 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins widely* Now that's what I call a prize! *snickers evilly* I found that sooo enjoyable; you have no idea. *giggles*
Hmm, and if the robots were in the shape of animals, then it must have been Power Rangers, Wild Force, to be exact. *sweatdrops* I don't watch that show, I just see a lot of commercials!
Anyway, great fic! ^_____^ |
Reviewed By: LQ On: April 16, 2003 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *falls off chair laughing at the first half of it* Too funny. *reads lemony goodness* @_@!!!!! *goes into zombie hentai drool mode* Sooooo goooood!!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Czarina On: April 16, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, BlueSeptember, this was AWESOME! I thought/hoped it was going the way I thought it was going, whooo, hooo! Gets my vote for the most fun way to get these two hotties together! And the show Mokuba was watching was Power Rangers. Hee hee! Thanks for a fun read! |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 16, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoohoo! XD The NC-17 is even better! And is the show Mokuba was watching -- "Zoids" ? ^_^; It might be, I dunno. :) Wonderful, smutty, tasteful story! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 18:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: Hehehe. I love Yami's *ahem* cocky remark at the end. That was too great. Funny and sexy. Perfect combination.
Karen: Yep. You should be proud.
LD: And feel free to write more of these ^_~ |
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