| "The Hot Spot" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: JoeyWheeler2004 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow this was awesome! this is the first fanfic ive read where twister turns into sex, and i loved it!! keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: Me On: August 05, 2004 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What Mokuba watching the power rangers? Oh, and great story.
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Reviewed By: Saka M. On: May 10, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cute!! And YamixSeto's my favorite pairing. ^_^*
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Reviewed By: Rhea On: December 17, 2003 23:06 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great, real engrossing. And the show is... POWER RANGERS!!! hehe go you
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Reviewed By: Christi Morelei [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2003 23:08 CST
Comment/Review:
AWESOME FIC! XD Niiiice, definitely nice! You should post another chapter! Mmm, more lemons. *evil grin* And I have a strange hunch that Mokuba was watching Power Rangers. *shudder*
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Reviewed By: Lady Sekhmet Ka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 01:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geez, how flexible does one have to be to win a game of Twister? ^-^;; Gods, I love fics where the last line is cute and/or funny. Poor Kaiba, destined to lose to Yami. Good story, Excellent ending.
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Reviewed By: Shini On: September 19, 2003 20:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^;; well, overall great fanfic, and the guess is.. Power Rangers? ^^;; I hope. |
Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2003 02:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*snigger!* Funny as hell! Love what Yami says in the end.... Fuck the score board though! Kaiba got Yami! I say KAIBA WINS!!!!!! Muhahahahahhahaha *more insane laughyer insues* |
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::manicial giggling/shrieking::
Oh my ::gasp:: GOD!! ::gasp:: That was so hot, funny, sweet and cute.
I love the way you've captured Kaiba in this, and everything from the beginning to Yami smirking and saying that he won at the end.......::snicker/snerk:: Wonderful.
Please, please write some more to this, like the reactions, Kaiba's excuse for not letting Mokuba see the tape, or if Mokuba gets to it first, then having everyone's reactions.
Are they going to keep it secret?
I know this wasn't meant to be a series, but it's just too good to let drop.
Anyway, excellent as always.
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~ |
Reviewed By: Kisho On: June 19, 2003 22:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write another fic i so want to know what mokubas reaction when he watches the tape! I loved this story it was funny, amusing,and god damn sexy! More Seyo/Yami Please! |
Reviewed By: Yami Tenchi On: June 13, 2003 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was even better, and no duh, cause it ain't on ff.net! you gotta write more, it's so cute, yet disturbing, but kawaii all the same! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst Sin and Yami Phiona On: April 18, 2003 14:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
-snickers-
Phiona: OHOH! I KNOW THE SHOW!! ZOIDS!!
-falls over laughing-
Phiona: ^^ AWESOME FIC!! ^_____________^ |
Reviewed By: Jessie On: April 17, 2003 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
That "I won" comment at the end of the story just cracked me up! Poor Seto, he worked so hard to lose anyway. ^_^ Thanks for the fun read! |
Reviewed By: Red Five (You might know me from FF.net) On: April 17, 2003 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
POWER RANGERS! *dies laughing* MOKUBA WAS WATCHING POWER RANGERS! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
For the record, I love Seto/Yami fanfics! Keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Kris On: April 17, 2003 15:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Seto building his own version of twister. Somehow I can see him doing that. Loved the fic, and it's obvious he was watching power rangers. |
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