| "If you Believe" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: babygurl_tiff On: August 16, 2005 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh, by the way, great story. i really enjoyed it! now...PLEASE UDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: NekaPrncss12 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that was very good soooo... can you write the next chapter real sooooooooon!!!!! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: mariomouse On: December 31, 2003 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is sooo cool. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: yuokos bitch On: November 16, 2003 18:37 CST
Comment/Review:
sorry about my last review but my bro pushed the enter key and you probaly know what happened but any ways yur fic is good so far and you shuold hurry up and write more chapters
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Reviewed By: yuokos bitch On: November 16, 2003 18:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yur fic is good so far and i
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Reviewed By: Lacey Breifs ^^ On: September 25, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I just read your fanfic and thought it was great. The fact that Freiza was trying to get Pan to mate with him was kinda creepy, does he even have....? lol I've been working on my own fanfics lately and hope they turn out as good as yours! Can't wait til u finish the next chapter, but i know how u feel having to do piano lessons an heaps of groups leaving no time for writing and for me thousands of assignments. I'll have my fanfics up on this site for u all to read soon! ciao, luv Lace
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Reviewed By: Sophs On: June 22, 2003 10:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it...hang on i don't love it...i LOVE it. ^_^ i can't wait till the next chapter. can you email me when you do the next chapter? sophs@hove-to.com.au
also i thought i might suggest somthing. when Trunks rescues PAn (after fight wiht freza) could she run into his arms and they kiss passionatly. but then freza * who trunks thinks he is daed but isn't)hits Trunks with a ki blast. PAn cries after she kills freza with one finnal move. she kneels down by trunks and says "don't leave me trunks please" he says he loves her yadayada .... passes out wakes up in hospital a week later and see Pan sitting alseep in a seat next to him. so what do you think? bit stupid but o well ^_^ |
Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 10, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know it sounds werdid with all the perfect socers but i only read the storys that i think sound good, and they usally are. I like your story it has two of the elements that i like 1 taking place on my fav plant and 2 one of my two fav couples t/p , g/b no offince to other couples or yiao or shelong or whatever the blasted word is. i like your thinks its creative and would really really really like to know tha end |
Reviewed By: SWEETNESS On: April 24, 2003 19:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE |
Reviewed By: THE G KYIA On: April 24, 2003 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE WRITE MORE I AM CURIOUS TO FIND OUT WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT BETWEEN PAN AND TRUNKS |
