| "Because I Love You" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: foxyval [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, the seme would obviously have to be either Heero or Wufei. They're the only two pilots who have dark eyes. They also have nearly-equal "cold" demeanors. Also, the uke--who has alabaster skin--would either be Duo, Quatre, or Zechs. I don't think it's Zechs. Clearly, the "bottom" would have to be small in a way (easy to hold down, you know)...both Duo and Quatre fit that build. At first, I thought 5x2, but then later I settled for 1x4. But I ended up deciding to substitute for my own original characters, as I often do in fics like this. I like having my options open. But, gotta say: Horrible fic! Oh but, not in a way that I don't like...obviously.
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Reviewed By: M On: July 29, 2004 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fic. I haven't read one like this before. Have to confess that I can't say I "enjoyed" this fic. It's too dark and seems too close to being a rapefic for me to enjoy it. It wasn't boring though by any means. As for the pairing I'm guessing the seme is Wufei given the mention of the eye colour in the first paragraph. The others all have lighter eyes. (Just an observation though. I could be wrong). The uke could either be Quatre or Duo given they are not really putting up a fight with the seme like the other two would. Not sure which one though. I'll guess... 5x2? Care to relieve our suspense?
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Reviewed By: - 0 On: May 18, 2004 20:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I hate this story!
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Reviewed By: Karia On: March 06, 2004 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I do like this one-shot fic a lot. *Smiles* Please continue your other stories too! It's really great! ...But the problem is...umm gomen nasai, but is this Heero/Duo? @.@; But whatever couple it is, it's still wonderful and that it's like a story for us readers to wander/ponder about. As I said before, I like it. ^^
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Reviewed By: Meanne77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uh. Well... Don't really know what to say... It's a bit strange ^^; Also a bit... unfinished ? I'm sorry, but I feel this way... What happens next, what happens now ? The one in love can't go on like that endlessly if the other doesn't change... so, does he change, or does the one in love break ? What ?
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Reviewed By: Meanne77 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uh. Well... Don't really know what to say... It's a bit strange ^^; Also a bit... unfinished ? I'm sorry, but I feel this way... What happens next, what happens now ? The one in love can't go on like that endlessly if the other doesn't change... so, does he change, or does the one in love break ? What ?
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Reviewed By: Devina On: December 13, 2003 18:23 CST
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uhm...this left me puzzled...@_@ it was Duo and Heero right? or Quatre or something...BUT PLS LET IT BE DUO AND HEERO!
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Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis (2 lazy 2 sign in) On: October 25, 2003 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! Y haven't you continued this?? Who is it?? Is the domenient one Heero and the uke Duo? Please say yes!! I love that pairing, continue soon!!
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Reviewed By: R_Winner [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who was it!!!???? Which pilots? I'm conpuzzled! Write moe and tell me who the were!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
