| "Heero has a Kid?" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: Danya On: July 20, 2003 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey That was great you should do a sequel!
Not only that you had my favourite couples 3x4 and 5xS even though I usually don't agree with the other couples. The story was still.........
AMAZING!
You should really think about doing a sequal!
I have an idea if you want to hear it, just email me.
danya_angel@yahoo.ca |
Reviewed By: Deanna/Angel On: July 20, 2003 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really enjoyed this fic but i want to know what happens next ....
P.S. i would think that Meggan would be worryed about angel because she was just tooken from school without even knowing who and did the gundum piolots just take her from school or what? and does any1 get married (Heero/Meggan)or (Duo/Hilde) or (Wu Fei/Sally) or i don't know if they could get married but what about Quatre/Trowa? |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 14:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhh!!!!! I'm so glad it had a happy ending! This was a wonderful story and very sweet. I'm glad you finished It, and that they are finally together. I'm also glad that Relena got dumped on her butt. It's not that I hate her.... she's just reeeeeally annoying. Anyways, great fic! Hope you write more like it. Ja! |
Reviewed By: princesspriscillamaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its really good please tell me when the next chapter comes out. I'm dying to read more. Esp on the whole heero being dad part. thats what makes the whole plotline so interesting. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ooo hoo hoo! Dr. J got his ass kicked, Dr J got his ass kicked! So is this story going to have a happy ending or what? The big question is though, is Heero going to remember everything that Meggan made him forget? Sure hope so! C ya soon! Happy writing! ^_~ By the way, as for feedback? I LIKE IT< I REALLY LIKE IT!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angelica On: June 29, 2003 14:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love you story and I've been following it for some time now, but this chapter, chapter 8, is very confusing. I think u left out lots of words and so I am more confused than satisfied. Go back and read your story from online and see how it sounds. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!! You other authors are so cruel! I hope I don't give anyone heart failure with my stories! (what am I saying? all my stories are comidies!) Sorry, you'll have to forgive my babble, no computer for a whole ten days, good thing i had that straight jacket with me... heh...heh? Anyways, please update soon? I'm in story deprivation right now. These stories are what keep me going! I really hope something bad doesn't happen, like someone getting killed, because , you know, that would be bad! ~_~0 Yyyeeaahh, I'm going to stop now. Great story! Babble to you later! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Charlie The Otaku Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2003 17:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you put yourself into the flow of it, the story's good. can't wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 17:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
Other than the fact that the posting confused the hell out of my I loved it! @.@ the dance was so romantic! *Little girl squeel* But who were those bastards that beat Meggan senseless? Please tell me someone followed her and will help her out? Ha...ha...haha *crazed look as music starts* I'm hanging on a cliff, Oh yeah, I'mmmm HANGING on a cliff... Music fades out as Wren walks off with a baseball bat loking for something to smash. THONK!! Too late! *eep* Going to stop ranting now, by the way, the thonk was baseball bat having an intimate connection with that b**** Relena's head! Mwahahahahaha!!!! She's all swirly eyed now. Hnnnn! What was I sayong? Oh yeah, stopping the ranting. Okay, update soon and happy writing! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 20:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay, I like it, I hope the next part is out soon. |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 10, 2003 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story kepp on writing |
Reviewed By: unicorn144 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 20:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like it so far, can't wait till the next chapter is out. |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2003 11:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is what is commonly known as an evil cliffhanger. (In a very matter of fact voice) Think you could do something about that? Your story is very good, can't wait to see what happens. Please write more soon? |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 00:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww........ *tears well up* that was just sweet.... I really hope that him and Meggan work things out. And get rid of Relena too of course. I can't wait for the rest! Til then! Ja ne! |
