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Reviewed By: spini (not logged in) On: March 29, 2006 05:48 CST
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Ich bin zwar enttäuscht, dass es zuEnde ist aber auch gleichzeitig dankbar, dass du trotzdem am Schluß noch hingeschrieben hast, wie alles endet. Ich will hier nicht sentimental werden, aber muss doch erwähnen, dass du mir mit dieser Fanfiction-Story viele schöne Stunden Lesespaß bereitet hast...(klingt das nicht schnulzig?) Aber es ist die Wahrheit! lol Man sieht sich! Tausend Dank!! MfG spini
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Title: omg
Reviewed By: Free-sprit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2005 14:00 CDT
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I'm serius, I almost cried... Pore Vegeta! God, how I hate Freeza! Ah well, love the story, good job. keep it up. :)
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Reviewed By: mirai shell On: April 16, 2005 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty good plotline. I really like twists in the story: having Vegeta end up in a military base and that B/ V both share similar traumas in their past(esp. Bulma's father. nisce twist) This fic is very different from most B/V fics out there and tha is a plus, because most usually have the same old stuff in it, so kudos to you for that. The only thing that I didn't like was the lemon. I can understand that you wanted to place an emphasis on the two of them having a healing sexual encounter, but some of the scenes seem a bit fuzzy and unclear. This could just be my bias, because I am an avid lemon fan (WOO-HOO!!!)but I'd preferr them a little more detailed. Your chapter was quite good and plaese, update soon!!!! mirai_shell@hotmail.com
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Title: .
Reviewed By: spini [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 08:27 CDT
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Yes I have to say it´s even better than before!! You did great! Really it´s perfect *schleimschleim* *lol* Haste dir wirklich mal überlegt ein Buch zu schreiben??! Wär bestimmt ein Knaller! *lol* Anyway I love this story!!
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2005 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And I mean every one of those 10's up there! That was such a beautiful chapter. Sorry I've only gotten around to it now. My internet has been screwy and for some reason it wouldn't log onto MM.org until today. My email address is still the same as in my last review if you'd like to compare plot ideas or just chat about writing or DBZ or anything. I really love this story and I'm so glad you're still working on it. It's so wonderfully unique and your writing is so soulful. Again I'm just struck by the poignancy of your Vegeta. Most people just can't write him as an emotional being without going totally OOC, but yours is just amazing. If you changed the character's names you could probably turn this into a really great book -- I'd sure buy a copy! Good luck with the next chapter, I'm holding thumbs that inspiration comes quickly ^_~
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Reviewed By: spini ! On: January 09, 2005 09:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes an update! Thank you so much! Ít was worth waiting! Then go ahead and study a lot, so you pass your exam! Then you have time to write the next chapter. We´ll be waiting! lol love ya
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Title: heyhey
Reviewed By: triniprincess89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey omg!!!!!!!!.... it was way kool are u gonna update soon? i luved the whole new point of view u showed their past and it was a really kool alternate universe........
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 14:54 CST
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Glad to see you updated! Thie was certainly an interesting chapter yet very unexpected. I would have liked to have seen more descriptions of the scene because I couldn't piture where they were, etc. But I am excited to read more. And I hope you will find time to write.
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Reviewed By: spini On: October 14, 2004 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey are you still working on this fic? It would be a shame if not...So please update as soon as possible! love ya
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Reviewed By: Evil Saint (not signed in) On: May 18, 2004 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK, I know a lot of people just tick all the 10/10 boxes to flatter authors even though the stories really aren't that great, but this one definitely merits a perfect score. I was surfing MM last night looking for some quality B/V fanfiction. It's sad, but there doesn't seem to be a lot of that around. I was on cloud nine when I stumbled onto this little gem. I love AUs, but most are cheesy with WAY too much OOCness, however this one is original, engaging and best of all... believable! It was like settling down with a really well-written novel that I just couldn't put down. I don't know if you intend to finish it or not, but if you'd like to exchange some ideas on non-fluffy romance I'd be really extatic. My email address is evilsaint243@hotmail.com if you'd be interested. I really love the way you write and I really, truly hope that you do finish this fic, because it's probably the best I've ever read. Hugs ^_~ Stephanie
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Title: Wow! ^_^
Reviewed By: Vegge's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2003 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I just stumbled upon this wonderful gem while trying to find an interesting and unique type of AU. Your talent as a writer is phenomenal. Initially I wasn't sure if I would enjoy it. Usually when writing an AU, writers don't take the time to describe the world they are presenting. You've done an excellent job with that. Also you have also shown how Vegeta is very resourceful, on guard, and perceptive with his surroundings. Sometimes it's written how he can take care of himself, with him having advanced senses (sight, hearing, etc.) but it is rarely ever described where the reader can actually experience it for himself or herself. That was one thing that really captured my attention. It's nice to experience situations like that. It was also wonderful to see Vegeta trying to fit into society, trying to learn as much as he could about the humans; and that he doesn't know certain things that most writers would not think to consider (like what a stretcher is, or what "sir" means). And it is also nice to see the humans from his perspective where he is judging them by his criteria in such a way where it's not all shallow commentary. I also like how you show a common background that both Bulma and Vegeta share. I think it's an excellent way for them to relate or understand one another. In regular BV fics, it's often times not considered. But it is actually an important to show some commonality that can strengthen any sort of relationship that will develop. And by the way, I like your Bulma. She's assertive when she needs to be but without the annoyance. And the way you write Vegeta is superb. I don't know what you have planned for this story, I am very excited to find out, and so here is my addy: vegges_mate@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 23:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic. Please update quickly!! |
Reviewed By: Kegger007 On: June 30, 2003 19:58 CDT
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Another exciting addition to the saga of Vegeta. I don't know much about the military either, so you won't get any complaints from me. I like seeing Vegeta trying to (without blowing up)integrate himself into the human society. I almost felt sorry (almost) when I read Segeant Azuma's comment about Vegeta. "Banana Eating Monkey" is not the best phrase to use with a saiya-jin. So now Vegeta has a job, I wonder how he is a teaching? I enjoyed the chapter, keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 22, 2003 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, please update, pritty please? |
Reviewed By: *StaR* On: June 16, 2003 02:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I love this story! It's one of the best i've read, and I like stories with a certain amount of intelligence and entertainment rating. :)
The way you discribe humans out of Vegeta's point of view is so well thought and original :) I just love the human reaction on him and his frustration when he's trying to be like them, but actually doesn't want to at all :)
Do you have an update-list? (where you mail people who want to know wheter you've updated the story) Because I really don't like scrolling through all those low-class stories just to see if the good ones are already updated.
Keep writing!!!
Love, *StaR* |
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