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| "Heaven's Tears" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: Kikvws On: July 19, 2004 19:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awsome job...what a kick ass ficcie! Loved the ending, it was all so, so sad but real. Wonderful!
| Reviewed By: Kit Ryukasai On: March 30, 2004 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
NICE use of language!!! Great fic... I almost regret it being so short, but you do it with such style that it works well! ;) Props!
| Reviewed By: Yue TK Sumeragi On: April 23, 2003 20:16 CDT
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wow, that fic was good! I like the use of the rain, the description of shoadows, gogyo's caracter, Hakkai's silences that meant a lot and the ending was realy well written! I -very much- like the idea! continuuuuuuue ^o^ | Reviewed By: Kia On: April 19, 2003 22:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
The fic was well-written, I like your poetic imagery.
(don't really like the rating system)
Umm... I haven't finished watching all of the episodes, so I was a little confused as to the interchange between Hakkai and Gojyo. Perhaps a bit more on the exchange before the sex, in particular on just why they started having sex in the first place, even though Goyjo obviously brought back unpleasant memories for Hakkai.
The lemon itself was short but lovely, and I especially like the ending. |
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