| "Is This Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: TobySeer On: December 10, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
it's good for a fic about... well, i don't normally read this stuff but it's pretty good...
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2003 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaa more inu and kag fics
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Title: non needed
Reviewed By: gwenstefani213 On: December 07, 2003 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, even though I dont know much about Inuyasha but story was good and so was lemon scene. Nice work hun :) Laters
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Reviewed By: Now wouln't you like to know On: November 25, 2003 21:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please contine this fan fic
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the story started out at a good solid pace(that's a compliment). When you got to the lemon you seem to have rushed through it as though you were embarressed by it. First of all take these as helpful hints not a flame. I don't think that you should of put the lemon in the first chapter unless this is a one-shot there wasn't much feeling in it. I couldn't feel the love. You should definitely put more emotion in that. It was all like 'I love you, I love you to.' Then 'Let's have sex so I can get you pregnant'. Remember that okay. Please don't hate me 'cause trust me ALOT of people write worse lemons then this. Yours was actually not great but Satisfactory. If Satisfactory was your goal then you made it. If you decide to write another fic with or without a lemon remember Emotions make the world go round. I've even read violent storys with lots of emotion. You know like people cutting eachothers heads off. :P lol. Other then that your a pretty good writer so either please continue this story or start a different one. Update soon.
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Title: asap
Reviewed By: adamm On: November 25, 2003 11:03 CST
Comment/Review:
u have to make another chapter to this story. it just ended with him finding that they have made a pup. i hope that u make the next chapter where he tells her and the family. plz make the next chapter. hurry this is good.
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Reviewed By: IY fan On: June 18, 2003 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
