| "Memories of the Bell Flower" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: MARLYN On: September 04, 2003 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think is a good story, i'm a fan of Kikyo and like me if you write more about this story, and please NO write about Kagome in this memories.
Last favor please continue the history, i can't wait for read more. |
Reviewed By: Chrisany On: June 29, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fanfiction before on fanfiction.net but I just don't like the style.The ones I gave tens are alright.I didn't enjoy it because I thought it would have Kagome in it.Have Kagome in it.Now i'm not telling you what to.I'm just suggesting.But make it a little bit better.If Inuyasha and Kikyou have a baby I don't know what I'm going to do.But have Kagome,Miroku,Sango and Shippo in the story.Keep on improving on the story.If you keep on trying your story will get better.Peace out to all you readers. |
Reviewed By: Chrisany On: June 29, 2003 22:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this fanfiction before on fanfiction.net but I just don't like the style.The ones I gave tens are alright.I didn't enjoy it because I thought it would have Kagome in it. |
