| "The Power of Memory" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Great story
Reviewed By: Safrin108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2007 17:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked the fanfiction, but it was somewhat difficult to follow. I've read it once before and liked it, but couldn't follow it to well. I read it again a few minutes ago, hoping I could understand it more, but now I'm just even more confused. lol Funny how that happens. Anyway, hopefully you can write mack and help me understand the story better. I really liked it. ~Halle~
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Reviewed By: _Akari_ On: November 12, 2004 00:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...this fic was wonderful...terribly sad, but wonderful. Beautiful in a way...I...I really don't have anything I can say about this...bye...
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Title: That was amazing.....
Reviewed By: Anime_gurl1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 04:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoied your fanfic.... I've just recently seen Fruit's Baskets and decided to look up some fanfic for it, your's is absolutly amazing, it kept me reading until the very end (and I want to let you know that it kept me up until 5 in the morning reading it) Please keep up the good work and I hope to see more fanfic of this kind. Anime_gurl1989 ps. I want to let you know that I've only given one other author this many ten's.
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Reviewed By: simmysim [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 05:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just amazing. that was ... such a change compared to the common fruits fic. it pulled me in and kept my hungry till the last second. but there are a few errors that are just driving me bonkers.. "I think what I imagine in my mind is just as bad as what actually happened, if not worse. Yuki didn't respond, doubting that very much. as you can see, there needs to be a finishing quotation mark. ^^; there are few other very, very silly errors that i know you're better than. i hope you don't find this rude, but i would love to do a very quick beta-read of this piece. it's SO close to perfection and i would love to help it get there. :3
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Reviewed By: simmy On: March 26, 2004 20:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was just ... it was mindblowing. i'm going to go reread it and pray you have more of this kind of WONDERFUL fics.
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Reviewed By: Polka dot On: July 27, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never give all tens but this is so compelling and the way it was done backwards. It was dark and twisted and yet in the end it all worked out. |
Reviewed By: Lily On: July 25, 2003 20:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is so sad, and so beautiful in a tragic way. It actually made me cry several times...^_^; I like how each section is a jump in time and things seem to move in reverse; an interesting way to write. Wonderfully well-written.
Not to sound presumptuous, but I'd actually like to see a sequel to this. I think it's a very interesting concept. Perhaps a more detailed account of Kyou's recovery? I don't know, that may be just me. I'm a sucker for a generally happy ending. ^_^; |
Reviewed By: Ever Be [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2003 23:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. this is amazing! i love that technique you used, of course i was a bit confused at first, but i think it was better told that way then if you had written it in the usual order! |
Reviewed By: chibichibi-neko On: June 23, 2003 05:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
More !!!! This is soooo good !!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Akira_Hushrenada_Merquise On: June 06, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story!!!! It was sooooo..... nice
Different......
Anyway I just wanted to say that I think you are a great writter......
And by the way I was wondering if you were planing on continuin the story..... I would really love to see another chappie...... |
Reviewed By: qkslvr On: June 03, 2003 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow...this was...
*thumbs up* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2003 23:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Sad, depressing, lovely. I started out confused but I like the style of the story being told in reverse. |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 10:04 CDT
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This fic was soooo good. I love the way you started at the end and worked your way back to the beginning. Love the couple too! Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Kai-pyon On: June 17, 2003 12:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this. It's so sad... I cried a lot while reading this. And I loved the couple. You're a wonderful writer. I wish I could write half as good as you. |
