| "Adopted" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: April 17, 2003 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I would've never thought of this! Though when I think about it...and if ya ignore the age thing of Pegasus (though that eye may make him younger than he is)....I could see it! This is really great idea! I really hope ya expand on this! Makes me wonder what Pegasus may have been thinking during the tornament...he he he. Could have some interesting angst...he he he.
Anyway...great job and I really hope to see more of your work. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 19:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, that is so good! I hope you make another chapter. I hadn't expected that Jou's real mom and dad were Cynthia and Pegasus. My eyes just about popped out of my head! LOL |
Reviewed By: Geuna On: April 17, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was great! You should really continue!
That connection was really cool. I mean, I can see it. Mother's hair, father's eyes, and it would certainly explain the sometimes kooky behavior. ^__~ And he and Shizuka look NOTHING alike in the first place.
Though, as an heir, wouldn't he gain a TON of money? O_O WAHOO! ^__~
Please true to think of a sequel to this!
Geuna~ |
Reviewed By: Yami G-sell On: April 17, 2003 18:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
When I read this and read pegasus i said O my god!!!!!This is great and very original i wuv it!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Blah Blah The Terrible On: April 17, 2003 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sweet Bebi JEEZUS!!!! That... was very unexpected. Good originality! |
Reviewed By: Yami Kitsune On: April 17, 2003 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! That might have been short. but it was good! I have read a LOT of fanfics and not many people that i know can make a conection like that and make it stick in a short fic like that! Well any way that was really good ^_^ Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Jeshone On: April 17, 2003 16:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was absolutely frikin unbelievable I don't think any other author has ever attempted that way to be original. CONTINUE THIS STORY pweaze. |
Reviewed By: RedEyeDragon2478 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good work. and very origional! pegasus is joey's father. ccccccoooooooooolllllllllll. please angel please make a sequal! please please please please please please! make a sequal! |
