| "Crossing the Dimensions" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: wynter89 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2005 12:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
please i want to know what goes on next. please you have to update. i have waited more then a year for this. what you can do is tell us you gave up or something. good luck may kami-sama be with you
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Reviewed By: MinxFire On: September 24, 2005 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please Update soon I really like your story specially if its DBGT/YYH crossover very creative Bye!!! ^^
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Reviewed By: wynter89 On: December 04, 2004 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please you have to write some more. I love the plot and wish you to continue to write. PLEASE do you know what you are doing to me. I have read this story a year ago and i am eager for you to finish. GOOD LUCK WITH THIS STORY AND HOPE FOR YOU TO TAKE ACTION.
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Reviewed By: Kuroi Ryu On: April 18, 2004 17:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
PLEASES CONTINUE
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Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 16:29 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, ur story is very similar to mine, I can see why u thought my story was yours. Anyways, hurry up and update your story! Just one question though, are u going to fill in the details about exactly HOW Pan fell into the YYH Dimension? Anyways, bye! |
Reviewed By: yuyu On: June 04, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. tell me when updated. |
Reviewed By: Bejipan On: May 05, 2003 19:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Why haven't you updated this fanfic yet? Please let me know when you update this fanfic. I hope this will be a P/H, that'd be cool.
Bejipan,
My email is Pan9dot10@aol.com and keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: cdkobasiuk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 08:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey , this is starting out really well. It has a lot of potential. The estrangement of Pan form her family isn't "that" big of a stretch. I would like someone to wrote some good Kuwabara stuff too. Need more YYH in the world. Have fun with it |
Reviewed By: Ryo_oh_ki [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 19:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
CMON PEOPLE!!!! MORE REVEIWS MEANS MORE WRITING!!!! |
Reviewed By: Nesha a.k.a. Da Black Barbie On: April 21, 2003 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. It's defeniately a different Son Pan fic. Please, continue. |
