| "Yakumo's Surprise" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: Yoh! On: January 21, 2005 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
The writing skill at the start was great. This is a short fic, but well done. Although, I had some qualms about the writing nearer to the end. It's understandable if you don't want to spend too much time, but the writing became sort of... un-attatched, as if it was re-cycled material, not saying "cut and paste", just re-using a scene and a feeling that really doesen't belong there. Felt too unreal
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Reviewed By: Ayanami-san [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe.. uumm... he he.. err.. rite.. I think I'll be leaving now........
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Title: Whooity-Whooity
Reviewed By: Whinnie On: September 27, 2003 01:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummmm...perhaps,if there was more detail...oh ya,by the way...F-YOU MR FOO
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Reviewed By: Mr. Foo On: August 24, 2003 22:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a totally mindless save me, fuck me thing in less than two seconds. Get a story going to get the reader more interested and spend a little more time on it. |
Reviewed By: _Yume_ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2003 18:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
...You're mean... |
