| "In The Bedroom" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Amy Hirosaki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2005 10:06 CST
Comment/Review:
woooooowwwww.... this is one of the best stories I've ever read. Normally I read fics with at least more than 100.000 words... but this was different ... you even got my almost crying! That's wonderful, since that means your fic really appeals to me ^^ I'm gonna put in on my favourite list, since it's definately worth a big place!!! ((and a big review :P)) @_@
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2004 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:snaps fingers snapsnap snap: hmm very poetic,interesting and quite a creative way of seeing the world through both heero's and duo's perspectives. It seemed at some point Duo just stopped talking... lost himself and the same happen to Heero. but was heero always lost? was it Duo that found some part of him and then the moment Heero locked himself in the bathroom he severed that link, rapport that Duo heart made with his? (hmm or am I just babbling...i do tend to do that) wow, onward to teh sequel (^_-) And thank you
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 11:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is powerful and poetic! And gloomy, in the end (I'm supposing this is the end) but I guess that's in the logic of the story.
A really good try at a different approach to writing gw and fanfics in general; passive and descriptive to outline feelings rather than actions. |
Title: Lovely.
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 01:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic. I truly enjoyed keeping up with this little series. Your poetic, simple style kept me riveted.
Thank you for a lovely, unique read. |
Reviewed By: BlizzardAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 02:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, you write so good and I really enjoys these little ficlets. good job and keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis On: June 20, 2003 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I am like the others, usually I am the first to bitch and moan about how some fics are way to short but you did say ficlet and this works in your favour.
Loved the short story form and you capture each moment well with a story of angst and deep emotions that are simmering beneath our boys. Keep up the great work.
Shae-chan |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 19, 2003 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely -- simple and beautifully written. Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: June 15, 2003 16:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very....different indeed. I've never read anything like your fic. Though, it is rather enjoyable, as much as it pains me to see Hee-chan suffer...
HAPPY ENDING!!!!!! [or not, whatever you had planned is good, hehe] |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn...I really don't think there is anything that I could say that could do justice to this whole monologue...but damn it's deep. |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2003 11:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's funny, the first and second one I was just upset about them being so short...but it really works! |
Reviewed By: Airen On: April 21, 2003 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked these little ficlets. Any plans to continue? If so, I'd be interested in reading them. |
