| "Fly Away Home" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
excellent. the descriptions of the Shadows and their thoughts and emotions was incredible and extremely well written. you always manage to produce such a lyrical writing style that flows smoothly with each sentence. i can only say one thing to that: i'm jealous!!!! i wish i could write like that!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Evil Chibi Malik On: July 29, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooohhhh!!!! you updated!! ^_^ but you left it at an EVIL CLIFFIE. EVIIIIIIIIL!!! this chappie was great (just like the others) as usual, so please continue!!! onegai??? *chibi eyes* |
Reviewed By: Anime Addict On: July 15, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! You do just such an awsome job. Your writing style is absolutely superb. As is your ability to convey to your readers exactly what you want. I think this is one of the best written fanfics out there. Not to mention a great storyline and plot. Keep up the great work and update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: July 15, 2003 09:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh God!
Keep writing...please! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It has the...and the...and... oh my lord... *dies*
Cody's Muse-- overload of the gorgeous bishounen meter there, don't worry it has happened once before and she eventually recovered. but I won't be able to get her to write her own stories for awhile.
*twitch* "I love Sea Spray.... lovely bishies...so...puuuuuuuur."
Cody's Muse-- yep she's gone, update soon or I may never get her back to any semblance of normalness. By the way your writing style is superb. It's so well developed and detailed without being stuffy, repetitive or losing your readers' interest. You draw your readers right into the story and keep them in your world until you want to let them go so kudos to you! I noticed her edging dangerously close to the screen during some parts. we can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good. It took me a while to read all of the chaptes you've posted so far, but I like it. I hope you post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 12:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another wonderfull instalment, ocean! Cannot wait for more!! |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 19, 2003 23:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's...amazing!
I've no words, I'm loving!
Your story is fantastic, beautifull and sweet.
Great job! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind On: June 18, 2003 22:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Starts to giggle insanely and can't stop.* That was AWESOME!!!!! *Squeals in delight.* YOU ROCK!!! I have read this story over and over and can't get enough. You write so well, I love each one of your chapters more and more. I only wish I could write like that!!! Unfortunately, I have no talent, but that's why there are writers like you to inspire the rest of us. ^_^ I hope you update again soon, I truly enjoy your writing. *Sighs and wanders off to read the chapter again.* Much love!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter, well worth the wait -- and the lemon was delicious! The only caveat: some misused words (homophones, mostly), like "taught" for "taut" and "mute" for "moot". Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Kimiko Jade Charou On: June 18, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic it is the best! i really enjoy reading this i really would like it if you write more soon and i would like to ask a question if your willing to listen. where didi you get the egyptian writting ?? if you answer could you tell please tell me where you got them?? thank you if you you do and thank you anyway for reading a very good fic. ~kimiko |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 00:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
Once again I'm totally impressed with your writing. I like your characterazation of both Yugi and Yami.
I like Yugi being shown as a sweet but intelligent young man, and Yami as confused but not mean-spirited or utterly helpless.
I like your take on the Shadow Games and Yami's role in their creation and sealing.
Hope to see more!
Icz |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Amazing!!
This chapter has to hold one of the most intense, sensual, romantic, sexy lemons I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!
I mean it wasn't all Grunting and screwing, but full of touching, teasing and plenty of loving. Fantastic Work,Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I love this story!!!! I don't have the words to express the sheer greatness of chapter 10!!! Amazing! Simply amazing! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: June 10, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most fantastic YuGiOh story I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!
Please Continue!! |
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