| "Fly Away Home" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY MOTHER OF PEARL!!! This is such an awesome story and I've only gotten to chapter five! I've got to go now, but I'll be sure to read the rest as soon as I get back!! It's completely different from anything else I've ever read! (Oh and you keep spelling "secret" as "secrete" which is a different word all together) I still LOVE it though!!! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 08:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ra! What took you so long to post? I was worried that I'd never find out what happened to them!! Well, very good and write more soon!! |
Reviewed By: Anime Addict On: June 01, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story. You do such a great job with the details and the interaction between Yugi and Yami. Please update soon, you left it at a cliffhanger. |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 17:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
*drools* I love this fic, your writing is wonderful. But I think that you are going a bit overboard with Jou's accent. It's kinda hard to read. |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 00:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you have got to finsh this and soon. its too oo, silly me alwys seems t pass up the good fics. The only hing that can see wrong, is you keep mispeling yugi's name. ah wel his storry is so instering and everything I can picturealmost everysecene as if I were watching this on t. v. |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: May 20, 2003 20:04 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a Truly Captivating Story!!
I love seeing the way Yami and Yugi react to the sexuality the other is giving off. This is an Amazing Story!!
Yami in a Towel(Drool!)
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Death Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2003 10:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is sooo good! More please! |
Reviewed By: Tanya On: May 19, 2003 07:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I think Yami and Yugi are really cute together. Keep this going |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ Yami has a need for b33r! XD.
Wow the popsicle thing was *drools* :D~ awesome. When will the yami/yuginess start! T-T; Ah well.. I'll be patient *camps outside of mediaminer*. I'll be waiting ^.~.
I'm guessing Yami will be able to communicate once Yugi finishes the puzzle, ne? I could be wrong.. but that makes sense to me. *crosses fingers*
-Rei |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: May 06, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a Fantastically addictive Story!!
Your writing skills as well as your attention to detail are outstanding!
A truly original Yu-Gi-Oh story!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 18:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUSPENSE! SUSPENCE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! PLEEEEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! PLEEEASE!! *begs*
Augh.. this is so good.. it draws me in and makes me feel sad when yugi's disappointed and stuff.. awesome character development and such. >. |
Reviewed By: Rei-Rei [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 18:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUSPENSE! SUSPENCE! I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! >. |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind On: April 23, 2003 01:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really like your story, please continue soon. *Anxiously waits for new updates.* |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 02:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...impressive! I loved all the attention paid to detail and such. Hmm..wonder what Pegasus has planned..and when Yami's going to wake up. Really looking forward to the next chapter! I hope you continue! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 13:21 CDT
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I'm glad you updated this. I like it a lot so far. I hope you post more soon! I liked the bit with Jou explaining that the donut Yami had wasn't just a donut but something special. It was funny! |
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