| "Fly Away Home" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 12:36 CDT
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Another wonderfull instalment, ocean! Cannot wait for more!! |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: June 19, 2003 23:15 CDT
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It's...amazing!
I've no words, I'm loving!
Your story is fantastic, beautifull and sweet.
Great job! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind On: June 18, 2003 22:54 CDT
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*Starts to giggle insanely and can't stop.* That was AWESOME!!!!! *Squeals in delight.* YOU ROCK!!! I have read this story over and over and can't get enough. You write so well, I love each one of your chapters more and more. I only wish I could write like that!!! Unfortunately, I have no talent, but that's why there are writers like you to inspire the rest of us. ^_^ I hope you update again soon, I truly enjoy your writing. *Sighs and wanders off to read the chapter again.* Much love!! |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter, well worth the wait -- and the lemon was delicious! The only caveat: some misused words (homophones, mostly), like "taught" for "taut" and "mute" for "moot". Looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: Kimiko Jade Charou On: June 18, 2003 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic it is the best! i really enjoy reading this i really would like it if you write more soon and i would like to ask a question if your willing to listen. where didi you get the egyptian writting ?? if you answer could you tell please tell me where you got them?? thank you if you you do and thank you anyway for reading a very good fic. ~kimiko |
Reviewed By: Iczer6 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 00:08 CDT
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Once again I'm totally impressed with your writing. I like your characterazation of both Yugi and Yami.
I like Yugi being shown as a sweet but intelligent young man, and Yami as confused but not mean-spirited or utterly helpless.
I like your take on the Shadow Games and Yami's role in their creation and sealing.
Hope to see more!
Icz |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Amazing!!
This chapter has to hold one of the most intense, sensual, romantic, sexy lemons I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!
I mean it wasn't all Grunting and screwing, but full of touching, teasing and plenty of loving. Fantastic Work,Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:24 CDT
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Oh my goodness! I love this story!!!! I don't have the words to express the sheer greatness of chapter 10!!! Amazing! Simply amazing! |
Reviewed By: Phoenix On: June 10, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most fantastic YuGiOh story I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!
Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 08:36 CDT
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I soo love this fic. Even though you seem to take so long to post, it is always well worth the wait. |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 07:53 CDT
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WOW! That chapter was even better than the last one. You updated it so quickly too! Thank you. This story is just so awesome. I abosolutely love it! You do such a great job of capturing your characters' personalities. Great work! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2003 02:52 CDT
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Captivating...that was the word I couldn't think of last night...but it describes your story perfectly! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2003 04:57 CDT
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Once again...wow...I absolutely love your story. It is AWESOME! Very creative and original, very well written. The Egyptian phrases add a nice touch to it as well. Really looking forward to the next chapter!
EXCELLENT JOB! |
Reviewed By: sailor moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I said it once andI will say it again. I love this story and you must hurry with your updating. I am waiting and I think the way you wrte is so wonderful more then I could ever do in my lifetime. Are you a perfesional? If not I highly recomend it for you. It appears to me you have a gift for writing. Iill continue to hek for updates. I hve you listed in my favorites,however this computer appears to be having trouble emailing me with updates. |
Reviewed By: ilpalazzo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following this story on FF.net and it just keeps getting better. ^_^ This chapter was well worth the wait. |
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