| "Fly Away Home" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: SetoLover #? On: March 02, 2004 19:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed reading your stories. Please continue!!! (Must know what happens...)
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Title: Write more!!!
Reviewed By: catbeastaisha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 12:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're the first person I've ever given an all ten rating and the only one to deserve it. You're writing is powerful and the emotions behind it are devestating. I want to congradulate you on the fact that you have written the first ever guy/guy story I've read and enjoyed. You obviously took great time and effort into making this story work and I hope you get another chapter up really soon. I'm sure if you tried to make some original pieces, you'd be published in no time. Keep up the good work. -Catbeastaisha
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii! write more soon please! You are leaving off with an almost cliffie, but I'll forgive it if you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Phoenix51 On: September 29, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Go Yami!!! Kick Their Ass!!! This has to be one of the most Amazing Stories I have ever had the pleasure of reading!!! Please hurry with the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 17:19 CDT
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This was very well done. I love this story and can't wait for your next update!!!! *Bounces up and down happily.*
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Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 18:07 CDT
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That was a great chapter! I really hope you post the next one soon! I want to see how the battle plays out. Will Yuugi help? Post more soon!
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Reviewed By: ~*~Sakura-chan~*~ On: August 31, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
honestly, a very tastefully done and interesting lemon. i luved it. |
Reviewed By: Phoenix1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love this Story!! Please Hurry with the next chapter!! |
Reviewed By: WOW!! On: July 30, 2003 21:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You may get sick of hearing me say this but,
This is an Amazing Story!! Please Continue!! |
Reviewed By: Fallen Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 14:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey--
excellent. the descriptions of the Shadows and their thoughts and emotions was incredible and extremely well written. you always manage to produce such a lyrical writing style that flows smoothly with each sentence. i can only say one thing to that: i'm jealous!!!! i wish i could write like that!
keep up the great work and please update soon!
~*Fallen Hikari*~ ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Evil Chibi Malik On: July 29, 2003 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooohhhh!!!! you updated!! ^_^ but you left it at an EVIL CLIFFIE. EVIIIIIIIIL!!! this chappie was great (just like the others) as usual, so please continue!!! onegai??? *chibi eyes* |
Reviewed By: Anime Addict On: July 15, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! You do just such an awsome job. Your writing style is absolutely superb. As is your ability to convey to your readers exactly what you want. I think this is one of the best written fanfics out there. Not to mention a great storyline and plot. Keep up the great work and update soon please. |
Reviewed By: Silvia Sci Fi On: July 15, 2003 09:15 CDT
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Oh God!
Keep writing...please! |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2003 05:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It has the...and the...and... oh my lord... *dies*
Cody's Muse-- overload of the gorgeous bishounen meter there, don't worry it has happened once before and she eventually recovered. but I won't be able to get her to write her own stories for awhile.
*twitch* "I love Sea Spray.... lovely bishies...so...puuuuuuuur."
Cody's Muse-- yep she's gone, update soon or I may never get her back to any semblance of normalness. By the way your writing style is superb. It's so well developed and detailed without being stuffy, repetitive or losing your readers' interest. You draw your readers right into the story and keep them in your world until you want to let them go so kudos to you! I noticed her edging dangerously close to the screen during some parts. we can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:29 CDT
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This is really good. It took me a while to read all of the chaptes you've posted so far, but I like it. I hope you post more soon! |
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