| "Senshi Passion" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great.
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2004 09:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great.
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Reviewed By: elsoneatra On: December 07, 2003 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
who in the world is naru,I hate it when ya'll use the japanese names, ues the english names so we can know who is all in the fic
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Reviewed By: MayhemMudvayne666 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 18:14 CST
Comment/Review:
This is the first,short-story lemon,I've read with Usagi and Naru-chan!this is a good fic,I give it a thumbs-up.And that--Usagi/Luna fic, I've always wanted to read with those two;I just love putting uncommon pairings together.Hope to read more stories in the future,from you.
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Reviewed By: reandn On: April 25, 2003 08:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi. This was a great short story. Your pretty good at these Lemon stories. I'm really happy to finally see someone exploring some of the more unusual shoujo-ai pairings in Sailor Moon. Not that I don't enjoy the more common pairings like Usagi/Rei and Ami/Makoto, but there are so many more possibilities in the Sailor Moon universe that are hardly ever explored. It's the main reason I got interested in the Minaru group. Usagi and Naru are best friends and I've always wondered why there weren't any stories putting them together becuase as your story shows it's not hard to imagine them becoming lovers at some point in time. Your idea of putting Luna with Usagi also sounds interesting. Is she gonna be in human form or cat form 0_0 |
