| "Changing Makes a Difference" Reviews/Comments [ 87 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shadow On: June 23, 2003 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like u to write love is unexplainable. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2003 20:20 CDT
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Wow, that was a really good chapter! I'm glad Yuugi finally knows what Keith was doing to Yami. Are they going to do something about Keith? Please post again soon! |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 11:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice chapter. Umm..a sequel would be good. Ideas... umm..since Yami is graduating while Yugi is not, maybe some complications there? *shrugs* Or bring back Tea... *shudders* |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 05:49 CDT
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I liked this! A sequel or something would be nice but after what you went through a little bit ago, maybe you should take a break first.
Whatever you decide, I`ll always be a big fan! |
Reviewed By: Kirikou [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2003 04:15 CDT
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That would be fun to see, mayby Yami and yugi should get married to, It would probably be funny to watch the look on Keiths face ne?
Hope you write a sequal soon ^^ |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: June 20, 2003 02:16 CDT
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Love the story!!!! I think you should write a fic where Yami's mother finds out what a jerk her husband is! |
Reviewed By: Danya On: June 19, 2003 14:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before You Can't Be Serious!!!
Please say they will get back together!!! PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: Kokoru On: June 18, 2003 23:56 CDT
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Oh you suck! You suck you suck you suuuuck! x_x YOU WILL CONTINUE OR I WILL FIND YOU AND FORCE YOU TO CONTINUE! That was evil! I sat here for four hours and read this, expecting some sort of happy ending, and finding none. Oo.. YOU SUCK! CONTINUE!
Heh, by the way, I love this story now. *cuddles the story, but sticks her tongue out at the author* You suck, author (I didn't catch your name, sorry! ^^;;; )! Anyway, I'll be sure to bookmark this story so that I can check it later and finish it. I'm hoping that there's a good ending in store for it? Something sweet, but not too sweet to be sucky, right? Heh, this has been like a good book. I just couldn't put it down. Hell, I skipped out on my dinner (no, not like Yugi does in your story.. poor Yugi-chan! *huggles him with the story, sniffles*) just to read this. But I did have nummy Cheez-Its.. Wee.. I realize that I'm ranting. So what? =P
So, to sum up this rant: Please continue, I enjoyed this story very much. It's very much worth my time! Please? I wuv you for it! =D |
Reviewed By: Kel On: June 18, 2003 15:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COULD YOU DO DAT?!?!?! How??? *sniffles* They were supposed to get back together! Now they're all distanty! How could you do that to them?! They LOVE each other for Ra's sake! You'd better get them back together soon! >. |
Reviewed By: ShadowsLight [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Just love it, please do more! |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: June 17, 2003 12:19 CDT
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....not going to get angry.... not going to get angry.... WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you wrote them to have such a great life and then it all comes crashing down like that!!!!!! why!!!!!! why! why! why! why! why!!!!!! grrr.... okay you HAVE to have a make up chapter for THAT one.... you can't just leave us hanging like that... its just tooo sad!!!!:::river of tears begin to flow::: :'( hey you know this story sort of reminds me of the movie Cruel intentions without the really mean bet.. but a bet none the less.. o well just a thought.. UPDATE SOON YOU CAN'T LEAVE US LIKE THIS |
Reviewed By: cerridwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 10:29 CDT
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Aww. I'm glad they made up...sorta. Is this gonna be a happy ending? Please tell me it is... (hmm..maybe I shouldn't be asking that though..considering I'm not one to write "happy" endings myself...lol) |
Reviewed By: Shadow of Light [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*padlocks a closet where loud curses and screaming is sprouting from* Sorry after reading this chapter my own dark half got upset and nearly threw hte cpu out the window.
Dark Self: LET ME OUTTA HERE!!!!! *continues to ram into the door*
Not until you calm down so chill!!
DS: CALM DOWN?!?! I'LL BE CALM WHEN I SKIN THAT @#$%^&* TEA ALIVE AND CRUSH EHR BONES INTO POWDER AND USE HER ORGANS FOR ARCHERY PRACTICE!!! THEN I WANNA RIP JOEY'S AND YAMI'S BALLS OFF AND MAKE THEM CHOKE ON THEM FOR THINKING OF SUCH A STUPUD BET!!!
... Done ranting?
DS: Done? DONE?! i HAVEN'T EVEN BEGUN!!!
*turns on cencorus box when cursing begins once more* Okay... very nice chapter but poor Yugi. Please of please continue!! and plz!! are yami and yugi gonna be together?? i mean to loss your grandpa and love of your life in such a short while?? harsh.
DS: THAT'S NOT HARSH THAT'S LIVING HELL!!! LET! ME ! OUT! *rmas into door again*
oh boy... um please update soon!! ^^; *goes to get more padlocks and chains* need more restraints. |
Reviewed By: kim On: June 16, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ilove this story so much. OMG! I think I'm going to cry. Scratch that. I am crying. I really hope they get back together. Please update soon or I'm going to go more insane than I already am. Vast emotional damage. I've had a tough life as you can see. Keep up the great writing. |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 22:40 CDT
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Poor Yuugi and Yami! Please post more soon! I really want to see what's going to happen to Yami now that he's back home with Keith and to Yuugi now that he's at the orphinage. |
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