| "Dark Desires" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: sephonei [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2008 05:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story...would love to see how it ends. please update and finish the story ^_^
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Title: Great Story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens and how Inuyasha fixes the trouble with Kagome.
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Title: LOL!
Reviewed By: Miss. Angry Bird-Brain On: February 23, 2004 01:37 CST
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Don't ask about the name, its been a long weekend! *sweatdrop* Anywho, (steals sneakily) the whole Miroku man-bitch thing rocks! I can't wait to read your story of how he came to be your man-bitch. Keep writing them at the beginning of each chapter, they're a riot! I luv 'em!!!!!!!! You get Miroku but I want to steal Koga... *walks into tree from daze* Inuyasha's my favourite but he already has two desire-crazy girls and so I am waiting for the right moment to snatch him! *evil grin* Keep updating!! Lovin' the creativity!!! Miroku's pretty naughty mmm? Lucky you! *Runs away from flying debris and sharp objects!!*
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Reviewed By: daxemon On: November 19, 2003 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really got into it. By the way you are not stupid maybe a little absentminded, but don't worry many writers are...strange, so you fit right in, keep up the...great...work, will be looking forward to future chapters.
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Reviewed By: Spacegirlval On: July 23, 2003 21:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG I FEEL FOR U WHAT UR BROTHER DID IS SOOOOOOOOO MEAN I would never do that and im 14 omg!well please keep updating no matter what he says. E-mail me ok My E-mail is Panthera89@Msn.com
~Panthera~ |
Reviewed By: Lira On: June 11, 2003 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This is probably the best InuYasha fic I've read...(yay for the man-bitch!) I've been looking through lots of them but either they're out of character or there isn't a plot or there are just waaaaaay too many typos for it to be enjoyable. I mean..come on! Iuahsya? Heh. But I digress. THANK YOU!! Keep the chapters coming, I'm loving it! |
Reviewed By: Yumiki-chan On: June 07, 2003 18:18 CDT
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Hiya! I was just going to let you know that Kohaku has is called a Chain and Sickle or a Kusari-Gama. Just going to let you know! Oh, yeah great stroie I'm love'n it! By the by don't let Kgome Stay mad at him for too long!
lol, Yumiki-chan |
Reviewed By: Joyleaf On: May 20, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good God your story is amusing!!!!! I absolutely adore it!! I also enjoy the statement that Miroku is your man-bitch. ^_^ I find your commentary before the stories just as amusing(sp?) if not, more amusing. ^_~ I think that you're doing a bang-up job on this fic. I do hope that you shall continue this story and update quite often! I look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the great work! ~_^ |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 16:38 CDT
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Holy heck; a story!! I thought this was going to be just a nice dark lemon, but wow! |
Reviewed By: woh! On: April 23, 2003 07:58 CDT
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OK, so what kind of evil's gonna happen, huh? Please don't make it gross like Naraku raped Kagome or anything. Anyway, write more. Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 10:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I first sumbled across this on ff.net, and let me tell you, formatting makes a difference! One more reason mediaminer kicks.
Dark, interesting, a bit wordy at times, but pretty cool. I do wonder what Kikyo has in mind, and what her *ahem!* changed opinions of Naraku have to do with it. |
Reviewed By: Cat On: April 21, 2003 09:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. I've not read many story that Kikyou's the one who caught them. Update soon! Ja |
Reviewed By: Ali On: June 07, 2003 02:14 CDT
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Heh, I guess Im the only one who doesnt like the fic. You could have put the hentai sign thing on the genre. I usually dont read disclaimers, just really skip down to paragraps. Dont know why I even went to the title. Don't think I even looked at that either. Only on the fact that it didnt have hentai and was still rated R. Maybe it isn't even hentai. I don't read it enough to know for sure, and never will. But next time please put HENTAI on the genre when you write something like this. Reading the first paragraph alone gave me the creeps. This isn't a flame or nothing just a simple question...I just happen to dislike hentai, lime, and lemon. Oh well. I've talked too much anyways. C-ya |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 18:17 CDT
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Would Kikyou have thought this way?
Granted, when tied to a tree, spelled into silence, and forced to watch one's significant other with someone else, thinking clearly isn't going to be that easy, but Inuyasha was under a spell to think that she was Kagome, and the real Kagome even heard him say the name. Sure, Kag's going to be upset, but it's not exactly a betrayal, which was what Kikyou said she wanted.
...is Kagome's repelling power permanent? Does it only matter that Kagome feels it to be a betrayal? Hmm.
If Kag forgives him, will Kikyou try again?
I think Kohaku's weapon is called a kusari gama: http://tkdtutor.com/15Weapons/Offensive/KusariGama.htm
Chain scythe is an elegant thing to call it. |
