| "Runaway" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Laina On: June 24, 2003 10:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 07:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
In school now. This fic keeps on getting better. Eagerly looking foward to next chapter. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2003 07:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. Its nice to see a group who look hard but look out for each other and strangers. That is so cool.
I like this story so far, I can't see why there aren't more readers or reviews. |
Reviewed By: dragonheart287 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2003 04:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh man, those Brief parents are such ass-holes. And do I detect a perv butler?
Still, this is a great start so I'm hoping that chapter 2 is gonna be just as good. |
Reviewed By: Windwaker On: April 25, 2003 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good! I really like your stories. The only problem with this one was that Vegeta was a little OOC (like you said in the story). Can't wait till next chappy! |
Reviewed By: Bise B On: April 22, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey...i liked it alot but...there needs to be more story..but overall it was really good..cant wait for the next chapter! bye |
