| "The Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: PreventerPixie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 19:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a good story. i hope to see the next chapter soon
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Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 13, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What happened to Yugis parents and will yugi be able to defeat Yami |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 11, 2003 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did Kaba interfere with the match was he kicked out or something and want to get even. |
Reviewed By: Rain the Cloud On: May 10, 2003 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey what was Yami writing ?????? Who will win??? what will because of the winner??? |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 10, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was A good chapter. Who will win Yami or Yugi????????????? Update soon. Peace out |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 09, 2003 14:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was really good and i dont mind that you are going into details with Yugi and Yamis duals oney update soon. |
Reviewed By: Funkegirl On: May 07, 2003 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this has been a pretty good story so far. I'm sure it'll be interesting to see how Yugi proves that light mages aren't weaker. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 07, 2003 21:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Who will win the tourment out of the eight choosen. Gooo Yugi!!!!!! Update pleasse. Peace Out |
Reviewed By: Rain the cloud On: May 07, 2003 14:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey that was a nice chapter. what will happen the next day??? |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 06, 2003 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:doing the update as soon as possible dance:that was a good chapter. what will happen next? |
Reviewed By: Rain the Cloud On: May 06, 2003 14:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a really cool story because of the plote going on will their be more eplations to come in the chapters to come. its it time for dinner yet? update asap. |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 04, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good keep writing thanks for putting me in. :very happy dance: and i got to make a an explotion. Update soon |
Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah you put me (Destiny) in the story!!! YEAH I'M HAPPY NOW!!! ::does a happy dance:: Keep writing I like this story a lot!!! |
Reviewed By: Bob of New England On: May 03, 2003 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Because it is not like all the others that i read.
Name: Steven Shadow
Age: 16
Description: 6' 1' black hair Blood red eyes
Personality: two different personality, one good other(exterime)evil half the time shy, and quite other half rude crude evil mean bossy,
Magic Type : water
Other information: more of the lonner, short temper when really anger likes to cause pain to everyone and a strange destrive fource comes froms the body , when not angry likes to help others.talks to people who ohters cant see |
Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 01, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi it is me again hope you don't mind i liked the latest chapter and what will happen at lunch will their be a big fght their or will be peacefull. Any way hope you update soon because this is a good story.
:) Peace Out |
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