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| "The Little Light" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 01, 2003 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi it is me again hope you don't mind i liked the latest chapter and what will happen at lunch will their be a big fght their or will be peacefull. Any way hope you update soon because this is a good story.
:) Peace Out | Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: April 27, 2003 17:29 CDT
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Jamie Moonstar is a female | Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: April 27, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Jamie Moonstar
Age :17
descrpition: medium blond hair with bright red stricks, green eyes about 5'9
personality: fun loving , will stick up to anyone who is mean to others first and may get in way over head, a bit of a troulbe maker, however likes to see people get along, really smart
Magic type: fire
Friend side with:Yugi
other information:travel for a bit around the world before started school,owns lots of books, weapons,neacklaces because of travling , loves to pull pranks on mean people and and will fight for frinds when their in trouble and won't lie to adults,wont say good bye but all ways says Peace out for now.
This is a good story and keep updating. | Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: April 27, 2003 17:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Jamie Moonstar
Age :17
descrpition: medium blond hair with bright red stricks, green eyes about 5'9
personality: fun loving , will stick up to anyone who is mean to others first and may get in way over head, a bit of a troulbe maker, however likes to see people get along, really smart
Magic type: fire
Friend side with:Yugi
other information:travel for a bit around the world before started school,owns lots of books, weapons,neacklaces because of travling , loves to pull pranks on mean people and and will fight for frinds when their in trouble and won't lie to adults,wont say good bye but all ways says Peace out for now.
This is a good story and keep updating. | Reviewed By: LO-LO On: April 27, 2003 16:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good so far!!!! keep writing. by the way i want to be yugi's friend not yami's. | Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Rebecca Dellilo
Age: 14
Type of magic: water mage
Personality: shy, but friendly, very intimidated by older people sometimes
Physical appearance: medium-length golden blond hair and deep brown eyes, pretty small
Any other information: I would love Rebecca to be Yami's younger sister who can't seem to stand up to him. She's pushed around by him all the time.
Hey, ur story's awesome sis! Write more very, very soon. I love reading what u write.
~Ur sis | Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 05:24 CDT
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Me again, just to make it easier on you, I'd like to explain that since I am a air/fire maige, I had to start developing my powers early since my stupid parents thought I would get hurt. (I would so love to be in just 1 of Yugi's classes). Also I would love to meet Destiny Himura since she loves martial arts and she is a fire maige. Oh yeah, my last name is Solo. | Reviewed By: Alex Rose On: April 25, 2003 21:27 CDT
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Name: Alex Rose Mayella (Just call me Alex) (and, yes, I am female!!! But watch out for me *hint hint*)
Age: um, in the same yr. as Yami and Yugi ok?
Type of Magic: Earth (but if you want I can join the ranks of light and dark *_^)
Personality: Tough on the outside, but a "heart of gold" so to speak. Just a little harder to get close to. Maybe I could be Yami's friend? That might be interesting :) And I am always coming up with big ideas, I guess i'm a dreamer. O, when I said I could be a friend of Yami's, that is all I meant ok? No boyfriend stuff for me!
Physical Appearance: Think brown hair, a little sporty. "punkish apperance" Could I possibly stand out?
Any other information: Ok, I act before I think, and I really hope to see my name in your next chapter.... that would be awesome!!! You think you could include me? | Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 19:13 CDT
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heehee it's me again. I just forgot to ask if I could be friends with Yugi and be really mean to Yami if he is mean to Yugi??!! ::chibi eyes:: pwease??!! thankiess!! | Reviewed By: Angel Divinity [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Destiny Himura
Age: 16
Type of Magic: fire
Personality: funny,nice, the greatest sword fighter!!,incredibly mean to all enemies, daydreamer,loves food,compassionate to friends only. (Mainly the personality of both Joey, & Yugi)
Physical Appearance: Long reddish/brown hair to waist (always down) hazel eyes. about Yugi's height.
Any other information: An orphan who used to live at the Kamiya Kaashin Dojo. I'm a Kendo teacher but like using a real sword more because I'm better at it! I'm also one of the only left handed sword fighters!! ^^;;
THAT'S IT...hope I didn't give ya too much!! ^^;; | Reviewed By: Meghan On: April 24, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is an awsome start. since you asked i'll fill in the info.
Name: Meghan
Personality: I'm a dreamer. I'm always looking out for other people and I'm a shoulder to cry on.
Appearance: I have all different shades of blond in my hair with a couple streaks of blue. my eye color is hard to explain because it is constanly changing.
Magic: Most definitley water
Age:17
Well that is my description if you want to use it go ahead. but all i really ask is that you update soon. | Reviewed By: LO-LO On: April 24, 2003 07:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
name: Lauren Laidlaw
Age: 14
description: short dirty blond hair, blue eyes, about 5'4
personality: bit of a smart ass at times. like to have fun, nice unless you make me mad
I play the guitar. like sports
Fire Mage
I like the story. continue please!!! | Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 04:59 CDT
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Neat! I've read alot of fan fics but this one seem's really, really cool. Please write more very, very, very soon | Reviewed By: Mary Ann On: May 07, 2003 15:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey it is me again so what was Yami looking at when yugi walked in ??????? Update soon Please | Reviewed By: Solo_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2003 18:16 CDT
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You said you needed characters so here's one
Name: Jaina
Age:15
Type of Magic: air/fire (mother was air and father was fire and so I inherited qualites of both)
Personality: Out spoken, yet quiet at times. I am very nice once you get to know me, but if you lie to me, I will never trust you again. I have many layers and love to write and draw. I am very energetic and go through alot of physical labor just to prove I can do it.
Physical Appearance: I have waist lenth red hair, piercing emerald eyes, freckles, am about 5' 6", pale skin, and long legs.
Any other information: I have my black belt in Kung Fu, I've taken Ship Pal Gae for 6 years and have a sword with Chinese dragons running down the blade. I also take Kendo. (Yeah, I love martial arts)
(you can guess, this kind of discribes me) | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
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