| "Fertility Rites: The Great Marriage" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Rika On: June 09, 2003 07:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definetly a marvellous story (sorry for my spelling people), originality form the two types of stoies i had watched. Any ways keep it up adn then the story will be the most fabulous story i've ever read. You also got two of my favourite characters.
Later |
Reviewed By: Jem Star On: April 24, 2003 07:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, absolutley, remarkably brilliant!!!! I think you must have got this from a book because i recongnised similarities in the story. But it doesn't matter because you have got me hooked! so please get the next chapter out soon!! - I mean it is obvious that your are a superbe writer. |
