"Yohji's Bad Deal" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: deunan On: August 19, 2003 02:55 CDT Comment/Review: I thought that was pretty funny. Laf, very appropriate for the 2 of them. |
Reviewed By: Kelly On: July 31, 2003 22:09 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: That fic is so good!!! The style is a bit over used and you could have spelled things better, but its different from everything else! I loved it it made me laugh and smile so much!!! Yay! |